I miss you

by Erica   Jan 15, 2008


I miss you're dirty blond hair
i miss you're big green eyes
when you're gone all I'm left with is depression
we made such a good pair
you started off as my best friend
i was one who would always care
i would be there till the end
hurt you, i wouldn't dare
without you I'm just lonely
i need you in my life
you're gone now I'm left all alone
left to be nothing without you
all i can do is paint a smile on my face every morning
dreaming of the day you come back
and hold me and tell me you're here to stay

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  • 16 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Very nice work. i loved the emotions i get from reading this. Nice work. Shanik

  • 17 years ago

    by hadia

    Aww cuute!
    hang in there(:

  • 17 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    Wonderful poem, i liked it

  • 17 years ago

    by CountlessMoments

    Awww' sad but nice onee. i can feel you in this one.

  • 17 years ago

    by PygmyPuff

    Its kinda cute, lol. I like the emotion thats in it. Theres some grammar problems, the first 3 lines have "you're" when it should be "your", and "i" is a pronoun that is always capitalized. Also, the overall motive is slightly weak. It seems as though you wrote it just to do it, not because you were actually feeling the emotions you describe.

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