Pain

by Erica   Jan 15, 2008


Pain in my soul
pain on my skin
i cut myself deep
so the pain is not within

sorrow in my soul
sorrow on my skin
cut myself deep
so the pain is not within

anger in my soul
anger on my skin
i cut myself deep
so the anger not within

love in my soul
love on my skin
i stitch myself up
so the love stays within

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  • 18 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    I liked the repetion and i liked the end,

    i have a poem called "pain" too hehe

  • 18 years ago

    by CountlessMoments

    Your a good writer. nice job.

  • 18 years ago

    by Spirit

    Wow
    this
    is
    so
    now
    one
    of
    my
    Fav.s
    Thnx
    5
    (~:Sam Mayo:~)

  • 18 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Ohh that was painful obviously hehe... the words seemed so deep and very emotional.. keep up the good work 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    A very unique poem
    and a very unique structure. :]
    sad and simple, short, but full of emotion.
    i liek it. :] 5/5.

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