Wow!! i thought this was excelent!! 5/5!! people need to read more, it really is great! i love how it flows! great job!

I really like this poem. i like how you never come right out and say what book it is. you like the reader decided what book it is for themselves. it could be the bible, the diary of some other person or even their own diary.

Yet few people see what it really is
A sacred place full of magical worlds

these two lines really spoke to me. when i read those i was like wow. it is very true. if this book is about a diary then most people would never be truely able to see the worth in every word written in it. and if its the bible then many people either dont understand or totally reject whats written there.

This is interesting but ya it's not yet finished... continue writing it.. i'm interested to add some more if i can.. =]

I'm not really sure where else you could put this, I'm not sure there is anywhere hehe. As for extending...maybe some examples of what could be to come after the second to last stanza? But it's great as it is.

5/5 again

Em xXx

Nice theme coz now books are often undervalued
and you write with such emotions)

well in my opinion it is logically finished
first you write 'bout yourself, your feelings, then 'bout books at all, and ed generalizing
i think it's complete

5/5

I love you way you tied your emotions into reading a book!!! I enjoyed this very much!!!!!!!! >.<!!!!!!

Loved it completely, your a wonderful writer.
5/5

You are awsome!!!!! this one i like really goodL:)

Wow, i love it because its so true...not the best thing in the world but still g8. Maybe you could end it with like finishing a book like something like
Once the adventure is over
Once the pages are all read...
something like tht

I enjoyed this one also I can tell u r passionate about books. I am also.

WOW! amazing i didnt like the first stanza tho it didnt capture me a whole.. didnt get my attention. the flow was flawless which made this poem feel whole. i loved it. great poem with meaning

Many come visit this precious place
Yet few people see what it really is
A sacred place full of magical worlds
All these books have so much to give

true..

WhOA!

This WAS Awesome!! It's like a whole FANTASY! It's great. A very good imagery.

Keep writing! [5.5]

BEst wishes,

Sarah xx

Really good .... it is like me books are like my sacred place i adorn them therefore i love the library this shows the love of books by others and its like how books take you to amazing places where anything is possible great poem 5/5

A very interesting poem, i quite enjoyed reading it...keep on writing, you do have talent....5/5