Aw, that was so amazing. It makes me wish someone would do that for me. Very good! I give you 5/5!

AWWW TEAR..='] LOL
THAT WAS SOOO CUTE.. REALLY IT WAS!

GOOD JOB!

Damn, THIS SOUND ROMANTIC BUT SAD FOR A MINUTE AND ENDING IS JUST SO TOUCHY TO FEEL THAT WAY

The beginning is adorable,
The middle is painful [as in I feel the heartbreak and disapointment]
The ending is just the fairytale everyone dreams of.
It's a simple story with beautiful twists.
An emotional journey and deep view of how the heart works.
It's breathtaking =)
5/5.

Omg omg that was one of my favorite poems ever!!! i just loved it and im putting it on my fave. list!!! lol
5/5

<3 i love you silly

YO! this is your best poem! oh my lord! you just gave me goosebumps... it's like a movie that it's thrilling... damn yo.. a simple story well told that gives readers to be eager to finish it! damn yo! the best .. this is gonna be one of my favorites! great job!

Alex, that was truly heartfelt. I am almost embarrased to say that my heart sank at the end, and a tear came to my eyes for you. I wish I could feel what happened for you, for real in my own life. Just one more time. Bravo.

Thank you all for your wonderful comments, they really make me feel that maybe my poetry is good.