It crashes down around me...

by unblue skye   Jan 19, 2008


Buildings fall, tired, we call...
It crashes down around me, don't you see?
Fallen we are, so far...
Sleepless zombies, crouched down on their knees...
It crashes down around me, don't you see?
Dreadful sorrow, it fills tomorrow...
The stench of death is in the air, while the quiet rains of tears fall in pairs...
It crashes down around me, don't you see?
Swords slam together, creating a quiver...
Don't you see? It's crashing around me...
The world, petals curl...
It's amazing how it all happened...
The world, it crashes down around me...

Don't you see?

((It was posted in my newspaper, so I'm happy... And this poem is about the world, how the war is screwing everything up, my sisters husband may have to go into it and she has two kids... It's also a little about my life... PM me if you have any questions.))

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  • 15 years ago

    by undying blusher

    "The stench of death is in the air,
    while the quiet rains of tears fall in pairs..."
    Beautiful line.

    The sleepless zombies one was not bad either. ;]

  • 15 years ago

    by silent turbulence

    Amazing!! ur really nice!!

  • 16 years ago

    by XxSINISTERxX

    This poems awsome!!!!!! and but so true :(

  • 16 years ago

    by melissa

    This is beautiful !
    absoultely amazing =)

  • 16 years ago

    by Raine

    Wow that was very very impressive hun... it makes you actually sit and look at it in different prospectives and i bet alot of people can relate to it as well i know i can... you have a true talent keep it up =] oh yea and im gonna keep a eye out for that book your writing hehe ttyl
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