Angel, why not me?

I like ur poem... sounds sweet

Silly Angel, you can't fly with just one wing,
I see you lying on a bed of broken dreams
I can't help but ask- Can you love one such as I?
With your consent I'll give you strength and help you fly.

^^ Nice flow of words and nice intro as well...Lyin in a bed of broken dreams, is such a beautiful yet sad thoughts you have painted there..

My sweet Angel, I will love you in disguise,
For all I am is friendship- and the cost my heart's demise.
If I leave you here and let you fade away.
Would I be free, or have a debt I can't repay?

^^Very well written indeed..I love reading these kind of poems with punctuations and no ryhmes at all..For all I am is friendship- and the cost my heart's demise...The meaning is so deep but only broken hearted ones can relate...

Angel, why ever did you love him so?
Answer this and maybe I can let you go..
My heart is screaming let you fall,
But if I lose you as a friend- then I have truly lost it all.

^^Askin a question added effect on this stanza...Filled wit sad emotions straight from your heart..This piece really touched my heart..Excellent Job..

PS.. i dunno who voted down your poem but i think this particular piece is stunningly done..Anyways, take it from me, you did this fabulously..