A Story About A Girl and A Boy

by MyMuse   Jan 22, 2008


There once was a girl named Rose, she was so pretty and strong but her heart wasn't as strong as her spirt.

The boy was named Jon, he was sweet like a teddybear but he was depressed but his girlfriend's love was all that he needed in his life but we will see.

One time after they played near the ocean, it was a beautiful day and so was the sunset, it shined upon their hearts but I guess not enough for Jon.

When Jon took hold of Rose's hand, he had a frown on his face. "Rose, there is something you must know," his dark brown hair covered one of his green eyes.

Rose looked at him with a smile not seeing his sad smile. "Yes, you can tell me anything, Jon and you know that."

Jon sighed but picked up his head for his green eyes can face her icy blue eyes. "I am going to leave for somewhere today and maybe I will see you there someday," tears rimmed his green eyes.

Rose's eyes went wide with tears because she knew exactly what Jon ment, she squeezed his hand tightly. "No, No you just just can't! Jon, I need you! Please...I will do anything...," tears went down her cheeks while she grasped on the rim of his black shirt, the tears hit his shirt like bullets but they felt like a burning touch.

Jon winced but looked once more at Rose with now more of a frown. "Rose, I can't live, I just can't. I want to give you so much more then I can but it seems like I gave you everything..., if there was something that I could give, I would give it to you because I always treasure a girl like you, you always helped me through the hard times."

Time went by.

Rose looked at his dead body, blood swimming all around near her body. She put her hand on his bloody cheek. "Their were two things you could of gave and that was live and stay by myside and along with that love me like you always had. You kept me alive to this day now your gone," at these exact words, the rain fell pouring like the tears going down her cheeks.

Well I know my poetry hasnt been that good latly so I am so sorry...I hope you liked this story

CourtneyxHolland<3

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  • 16 years ago

    by kylexthexmagnificent

    Awww i really love this story, its pretty awesome and creative. i didnt get the last part but i stil liked it. =) good job and keep working at it. you'll become a great writer one day