Life is Unfair

by Sad and Alone   Jan 24, 2008


Sometimes life is so cruel,
Success is illusive, just like an eel,
You gamble everything, trying to fulfill,
You dreamt of heaven, but trapped in hell.

Why life? Ah! You're so unfair
I did my best, and I played fair,
The twin of life, I often fear,
I trusted God, with a silent pray'r.

But I doubt sometimes, if they could hear
The sighs and pleas, and my soundless tear
My blood's drifting, like a wounded deer
I wonder if they're aware.

How I regret that I was born,
When to live, it seems all wrong
All the sacrifices and all aspirations
The price I got is a crown of thorns.

Heavens forbid, can't bear anymore
All the sufferings and all the tortures
Drinking my blood, is this my role?
When does it end, when breathe no more?

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  • 4 years ago

    by brion acapulco

    I can relate I like it.

  • 5 years ago

    by Jessica Juarez

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  • 16 years ago

    by Kate Hicks

    Good poem. Good use of assonance. I can certainly relate to this. My most recent poems are along the same lines. Please take a look and tell me what you think. 5/5 to you.

  • 16 years ago

    by Sad and Alone

    Thanks a lot...
    I can relate to it also..
    actually this poem is too old,, i guess im still 16 years old then..
    and still, my life is kinda 'unfair'...though.

  • 16 years ago

    by haily

    This is an awesome poem...its really good. I could kind of relate to it. keep writing 5/5

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