Love the flow, it moves you along and before you know it you've read the hole poem. 5/5

Awwww.
That poem was absoulutly beautiful and such amazing love you could feel in that poem.
Remindes me so much of how amazing love feels in life. Very wonderful job, the flow was nicely done..nothing seemed to be forced rhymed. Well done.
5/5
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Awwweee, this was so sweet! I loved everything about it. Your words, every line the message was so clear and so beautiful

A romantic poem deserving to be written for your love.. everything is beautiful.. emotions are clearly spoken into words... =]

Aw this is such a cute poem. It has so much feeling in this. It seems like you really care about this girl. I love the way you explained it. Good job!

.:CiNdY:.

Huh... That's called poem... I like it...

This was a very sweet poem. I loved it completely. You are an amazing writer! Keep up the amazing work! 5/5

I really liked this one. 5/5