The friend i see

by keithnwv   Jan 24, 2008


Day by day we live our lives
always running here and there
sometimes we can't do what we want
it seems life isn't fair

life gets us down, we want to quit
we want to say enough
it would be so easy to throw in the towel
when the going gets real tough

sometimes i too think life's a game
always the last one to be picked
never to be on the winning team
but on the one that gets their ass kicked

i have a friend that has shared so much
as we talked from day to day
she has always been able to cheer me up
with just a simple - hey :)

somehow i know, but i don't know why
i can tell when she is down
I'd love nothing more than to make her smile
and take away her frown

she has a job, she works at home
she volunteers at the school
my girls just love when shes around
they think shes really cool

she always wants to be a help
she cares for everyone
but mostly wants to be there for
her husband and her son

a mirror reflects an image back
of the person that we can see
but i wish somehow she would understand
the one that appears to me

caring , loving , a beautiful smile
her many good deeds untold
theres countless lives she has touched
because of her heart of gold

when you get down and start to think
life's game is to hard to play
just remember what Jesus has done for you
to Him on your knees do pray

these simple words from a simple man
thats all i know to do
its not much but just know that
I'm always here for you

This is an older poem i wrote for a friend who was feeling down. This is the same friend that i wrote about in " A friend i never had". Hopefully one day our friendship will be accepted by others.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jackie

    A truly beautiful poem, your friend is very lucky to have you as a friend, 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Bekka Smekka

    Amazing!! i know this example might be kind of lame but i have two friends who can't get along. we're teenagers so its hard and i love them both and do not want to have to choose between the two of them. this poem really touched me because sometimes they can't see what i can!! thanks so much for posting this its beautiful!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Lecrissa

    Wow I love this, I normaly stay away from long poems but this kep me glued to the end.

  • 16 years ago

    by Kate Hicks

    A lovely poem. I also like the verse with the mirror. Very cleaver. Why is your friendship not accepted though?

  • 16 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    This is such a touching poem and it's beauty is felt. I love the fact that you stated that what we may see in the mirror isn't always how we appear to others. They can see true beauty like no other, and only true friends see it. Amazing poem friend. Glad to have been blessed to read it. Have a wonderful day.