Comments : The sacrifice of a star

  • 13 years ago

    by Tiffany

    Wow!!.. You are very good.. I love how it all flows to gether.. And I love it.. I look up at the stars every night.. because they are so beautiful!!.. Keep up the good work..

  • 13 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    I have to say that I really like your poem. I think that the nature section of this site has to be where one can find really wonderfully written poems. They arent old and dull like so may other love poems Im sure even mine fall into that category once in awhile. I found your work very interesting. Keep up the good words and may all your writings bring you peace.

  • 13 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    This poem is very well written and i really enjoyed reading it, Great job- your a talented writter.
    Nice choice of wording used to =]

  • 13 years ago

    by Live WeLL

    Wow this poem is so beautiful!! ... i love the whole idea in general about the stars in the sky and the way you ended it was great.. this is an amazing poemm... very well written and i really really enjoyed reading it.. amazing! 5/5 =)

  • 13 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    Zahra,

    Awww...what a beautiful story you have made! I am so impressed by you!
    I loved every line of this litle gem.
    I am going to add you to my favorites now!

    Take care,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 13 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    *To lovers a star makes a language of romance
    Stars are a symbol of greatness and chance
    So many stars have risked there lives now
    So how can a person not look and say wow *

    wow, such beautiful story. well done my friend you really has the talent to write such beautiful poems

  • 13 years ago

    by Heba

    Hey there, i think i am the luckiest one because i read it before you submit it !!! yepy yeah!

  • 13 years ago

    by Mohamed Shinaaz

    5star+ for your star

  • 12 years ago

    by Saving Grace

    This is so beautiful. I loved the way you wrapped it up aswell. Loved it.

    So many stars have risked there lives now
    So how can a person not look and say wow.

    Loved that part. Was an amazing write, you certainatly have alot of talent. Keep it up! 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by P00ki3B3ar

    This truly is a unique poem ive never read a poem about a star and they are such beautiful things that most ppl don give the time to notice im glad you wrote such a lovely poem it was a great touching poem i especially loved how you gave it life, bravo 5/5!!

  • 9 years ago

    by Brix Ambray

    Nice idea...5/5..i like the choice of words..simple,clear and unique

  • 6 years ago

    by gumshuda

    I've never read a poem as this...It is definitely a 5 stared poem

  • 4 years ago

    by CRAFTY KEN

    Nice work, I could not stop thinking as I read your poem about the Star that appeared in Bethlehem that led the Wise men to the home of the infant Jesus. I believe that Star performed as in your poem, building and becoming brighter each night until it burst and disappeared.
    5/5
    Ken