I have to say that I really like your poem. I think that the nature section of this site has to be where one can find really wonderfully written poems. They arent old and dull like so may other love poems Im sure even mine fall into that category once in awhile. I found your work very interesting. Keep up the good words and may all your writings bring you peace.
Wow this poem is so beautiful!! ... i love the whole idea in general about the stars in the sky and the way you ended it was great.. this is an amazing poemm... very well written and i really really enjoyed reading it.. amazing! 5/5 =)
This truly is a unique poem ive never read a poem about a star and they are such beautiful things that most ppl don give the time to notice im glad you wrote such a lovely poem it was a great touching poem i especially loved how you gave it life, bravo 5/5!!
Nice work, I could not stop thinking as I read your poem about the Star that appeared in Bethlehem that led the Wise men to the home of the infant Jesus. I believe that Star performed as in your poem, building and becoming brighter each night until it burst and disappeared.