VIRTUAL BANK

by IBRAHIM DWIDAR   Jan 29, 2008


Do you know how one feels
When he invests all his emotions in a virtual bank?
When he puts them and leaves them without a guard?
When he puts them although he knows he can't protect?

He has no way to get them back, no way to borrow
He has only to put
Do you believe anyone can do what I told?
I'll tell you who is this man, why, and what also he did...

He is a man opened his eyes in this life to find that
All his emotions and feelings grow only with one heart
He didn't feel, think or see but this heart
He breathed his first breath only beside it

He knew in pretty eyes and long hair the meaning of dark
He discovered the test of sadness, cry and laugh in lips
He saw the whole world through a few looks
And when he tried to collect all this ...

He found that they are all in one love
A love that despite all the emotions he put
Turned out to be no more than a virtual bank

15/07/2007
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  • 15 years ago

    by P00ki3B3ar

    I love your writing i cant help but read it!
    i loved the ending perfect ending!

    "He found that they are all in one love
    A love that despite all the emotions he put
    Turned out to be no more than a virtual bank "

    it all just flowed perfect! 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by adroit

    How sincere....Yeah, I can pretty much relate to it. Great poem. Honest Luck.

    Sarah

  • 15 years ago

    by TheRedWomanAndherBagofLife

    Amazingly true....

  • 15 years ago

    by Biya

    Though it is without rhythm but a nice poem
    5/5
    cheers
    biya

  • 16 years ago

    by Meme

    Hmmmm
    I read it twice to get it, lol
    really gr8 one
    5/5