Idyllic Night

by TILLmyLASTtearFALLS   Jan 29, 2008


... Idyllic Night ...

Switching off the lights I can still feel your aroma
Hearing your breath louder as you come closer
Tempting the night, you silently approach
Getting more and more nervous as desire flows...

Extremely slowly your silhouette brushes mine
As my eyes start adjusting to the lack of light
Carefully your fingertips touch my lips
Guiding them to an irresistible kiss...

A tickling sensation brings pink to my cheeks
While I listen to the melody of our beatings
Your exquisite taste's got me glued
Feeling you so near I'm uncertain whose breath is whose...

Your gentle hand drops along my column
As my closed eyes notice every slight move
Our lengthy kiss grows more passionate
Your delicate touch looks for my deepest secrets...

A delicious shiver runs through my body
As our eyes eventually meet...
Oh, what an idyllic night in my dreams...

TILLmyLASTtearFALLS
(C) 29th January 2008

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  • 15 years ago

    by WaitAutumn

    Oo feels so dreamy

    *Carefully your fingertips touch my lips
    Guiding them to an irresistible kiss...*
    i thought that was part was just awsome. simple, but i dont know, i really liked it.
    the [...] just make the reader linger for more. as if it could continue on forever.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Switchblade89

    Wow, very beautiful poem, I really love it. it's wonderful.

  • 16 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    Wow really great poem girly! i loved the figurative language in it adding that really made the poem amazzing word choice to 5/5 definitely <33

  • 16 years ago

    by RB

    I loved this poem so so so much. it was magical. i especially loved the first stanzas!!!
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by damont

    Wow this is excellent alot of emotions and easy to follow. i like the wording and it just flows so good. it does though sound like something out of a dream. but keep writing

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