Insane

by Saul   Jan 30, 2008


The thoughts, the anger the constant Pain
Are too much to handle, i'm going insane.
The nightmares attack me as i lie alone in bed
Destroying what's left of my anguished head.
I stretch out my shivering hand into the dark
Trying so hard to find some light some kind of spark.
But my hand finds nothing like many times before
Forgotten, forsaken i'm so easy to ignore.
I walk through life with my heart full of hate
because happiness for me is just too late.
Lonely,mind ravaged and heart hurting in vain
I'm the embodiment of what it is to be truly insane.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Silent Screams

    Saul,

    Wow. this is amazing. It gives you the sense of being in that darkness and at that brink and edge. It's an amazing visualization! You've got a lot of potential if you continue to write like this!

    5/5
    Keep it up!
    -Ally

    P.S- Thank you for the comments of my poems.

  • 16 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Really nice work here. I can relate. It's almost like a story. Great work. Shanik

  • 16 years ago

    by Dying Beautifully

    Saul,

    Wow this is great. I loved the rhyme scheme and the flow of it. Just the feeling you get when you read it the feeling of realization of what it truly is like to be insane. Great work.

    Rebbeca

  • 16 years ago

    by Dying Beautifully

    Saul,

    Wow this is great. I loved the rhyme scheme and the flow of it. Just the feeling you get when you read it the feeling of realization of what it truly is like to be insane. Great work.

    Rebbeca

  • 16 years ago

    by Dying Beautifully

    Saul,

    Wow this is great. I loved the rhyme scheme and the flow of it. Just the feeling you get when you read it the feeling of realization of what it truly is like to be insane. Great work.

    Rebbeca

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