Its alright..but u've kinda said some words over and over again..thats aight..overal it was good...well keep up the good work =P

Again another good one nice flow good
rhyming nice job

Dang girl this is an awsome poem ever i loved it so much words could not explain i loved the way you put it and the way you discribed victor very good i give you a 5/5 kasia

Wow very good poem and thanks for the suggestion!!!!!!!!!

Bravo! *claps* Take a bow girl!
That has to be one of you best yet. I bet you will make more but none will be this best ;)

Cute poem :)
I liked it. The rhymes were good and your feelings for this "voctor fellow" shows :P
Haha I wish you both the best of luck, and keep writing!