Triangular Form

I like that this poem is abstract, it made me look for a meaning beyond the words that were written on the page. The rhyming wasn't consistent but it didn't really matter because it read well anyway due the good flow.

Em xXx

This was pretty laconic but meaningful. every word has a lot of meaning and poetic imagery, and that is what i loved most in your way of writing in this poem.
the way your ideas dance around form is unusual and eye-catching, for example in these lines:
shattered in pieces
more leaks
it squeezes
triangle form

and in the end you tell us what is inside :
"twisted inside
that i can't hide"
- and both this form thing and inside thing tell us a lot about how you feel and somehow it made me feel quite the same while reading it.
you really did a great job.
5/5

Good poem. I like the way you used so few words yet you said so much. I like this poem. It's different than what people usually write. Very interesting. 5/5

I saw the hidden message.
She broke your heart!
I'm sorry bud, u'll get through it!
It's really good!
5/5

Beautiful. i really do like the choppy. i think that with an abstract peice, everyone can get a beauty and can find their own message....good job. <3