Shivers Down My Spine (not quite finished)

by Kalee   Feb 2, 2008


Guardo l'immagine,
Che lei ha inviato me,
E non mie posso si aiutare,
Comincio a pensare di lei.

Mi domando che sarebbe come,
Essere li' con lei,
Puo' esaminare i suoi occhi,
E puo' la tenere stretto.

Il tatto del suo bacio morbido sulla mia pelle,
Manderebbe giu' i brividi la mia spina dorsale,
Sentirei come ero nel cielo,
Quando la sento dice "l'amo".

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I look at the picture,
That you sent me,
And I can't help myself,
I start to think of you.

I wonder what it would be like,
To be there with you,
Being able to look into your eyes,
And being able to hold you tight.

The feel of your soft kiss on my skin,
Would send shivers down my spine,
I would feel like I was in heaven,
When I hear you say "I love you".

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  • 16 years ago

    by ImNotPerfect20

    I actually thought this was really good.. I know how you feel.. I really dont think you need to add anything else to this.. I think it's pretty much perfect the way it is.
    Good Job 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by TwistedAngel xx

    I like the poem
    i dont think you need to add more
    but if u do i look forward to it
    great job
    xx

  • 16 years ago

    by David

    I'd call it shivers down my spine. i liked that line and it would be a good title. this was a really great poem, i felt as if i could relate to it exactly how you have wrote it too. i have a picture. i gaze at it often.

    5/5 david