Wishing

by she   Feb 2, 2008


Staring at this Blade wishing it were sliding
Staring at my arms wishing they were bleeding
Staring at my marked Skin wishing it were clean
Staring at these chains wishing I were free!!

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  • 15 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    Holy dear mother of god. what else can one say

  • This is a really good poem, although it's kind of short. It's really good though. Good job!

    .:CiNdY:.

  • 16 years ago

    by Fear2love

    Powerful poem, real touching

  • 16 years ago

    by Alexa Eudis

    Nice, love the repetition, strong emotion. great poem

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSilentlyScreamingxx

    Very powerful words, no matter how simple they may be

    really really good :)

    Amy x