I really really really really like this poem.
The flow was really great and the
whole story you put in it was great.
I like the whole handle me with care thing :).
Well done.
5/5
<3tay

Beautiful title ... it really captured my attention. The story yout told was one I am sure many could relate with and Icould really see myself here. The emotions were real and the flow was flawles. Well done *5/5*

Greatly written poem, filled with sincerity and excellently expressed emotions. I like the flow from the beginning to the end, it is interesting and very original. You did good job with rhymes, too.
I like the topic of the piece, it is not typical love poem but it is steel very emotional and beautiful.
Greatly done!

I like the part "i dont know how much i can handle, my glued pieces arent quite dry" an amazing piece that has true potential. great job 5/5 !props!

Wow, the title is really unique and the content is awesome too. Everything flowed so well and the last stanza is my favorite part!!! Great job, 5/5!!!

An emotional story told with a great flow.

Nici

I loved it. great flow from begining to end, and you used strong, emotional words throughout. great job 5/5

Beautiful..!!
great job 5/5

Interesting poem, I don't like rhyming too much, it seems forced to me, but all in all I really enjoyed in this piece.
You express your emotions on a incredible way, it isn't too original but you still managed to create a touching atmosphere.
Good job.

Wow. That poem blew my mind. Haha, I used that little line from the poem. Seriously, this was a really good poem. You're very talented!

Keep writing!
Cayce

Aww.. man you and my bestfriend sounds the same after i finished reading your poem.. risking another broken heart is quite courageous.. well.. what's the use of our heart if we won't use it..?
anywayz.. great poem! i love it =]

I gotta hand it to you twin, you know just what to say and how to say it!!! Durn you're so good!!! Much Luv!!

**Tear-filled Twin**

My hearts like a puzzle
The prefect piece is hard to find
But when its all completed
The whole picture will blow your mind

love this part, this poem is well writen great job 5/5

Hey. this poem has really inspired me. i just got out of a relationship and this poem has really helped me. keep it up. =]
*5/5 all the way*
-MackenzieLayne<3

I love it, so sad and yet full of hope and desire, very nice!

This poem is ammazing:(
5/5

His poems is good
i likes how u describe what and broken
u are
i also wuv tha words, soso sad,lol