We're losing you.

The blood of a poets broken heart shows up well on the white page with words that show the cracks and depths of that wounded heart. Keep up the good works.

Aww, am sorry about your mom i know how much she means to you since i love my mom too much

she is always alive in your heart and that what matters

I'm always making these mistakes. I'm Dysllexic and can't spell for the life of me.

Kate, There is such sadness here expressed but shining through is also a strength and a resolve that only true love can give.
P.S. Try using 'Losing' in the title, that might work better.

Before i read this poem, i was going to ask what inspired you to write the others, but i think i can understand this one. and maybe now i know about the others. no words i can say will help but i am here if needed.

keith