Widows weeping ( Sedoka)

by Indian Comma Bean   Feb 7, 2008


Widow seen weeping,
Death struck quickly in the night,
Never again will she love.

Children laugh and run,
Oblivious to the time,
Now they sit and ask god why.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Very emotional poem. I love the flow. Great work. Nik

  • 16 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    Great choice of wording used
    =]
    this poem is very good and unique
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow...
    I like this a lot. You did great job with the form and the whole piece has truly vivid imagery. Every line is filled with touching sadness and the atmosphere
    that you created is soaked with overwhelming sorrow.
    Greatly done!

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