Hey. I\'m trying out the whole writing thing. I\'ve been told I\'m talented by family and teachers, but I want to know real opinions. I\'m in a band and we\'re all gonna be putting in our own lyrics so I\'m gonna post on here first to see if my writing can get any reactions at all. Please comment on my writing I really need your opinion! |
Here we go again
Another promise he's going to stay...
I see a drunken father
Lost in his own addiction...
Once again I'm waiting
Waiting for that person...
I am that hurt in your chest
I am that pain you know best...
Here we go again
Another promise he's going to stay...
I thought I couldn't survive without you. I still miss you every day, but with every day comes a little more strength to getting away from you. |
Why is romance in the movies nothing like reality? Why build up that hope that that special someone is coming for you... when really that never happens |
I've gathered up all the shards of my heart that you promised you wouldn't shatter and put it in a box. I wrapped it with your favorite colors and hope you'll open it again one day. |