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College student, looking for some feedback on my poetry...tell me what you think everyone..my aim name is spangler2k3 see ya later! |
Captivated in my idle thoughts, I seek to reach a...
Inner darkness shackles my soul, I am my own worst...
Take a walk with me down memory lane,
as far back as i remember...
Take a walk with me down memory lane,
as far back as i remember...
Her flush red lips, can take you into stupor,
Cherishing every grain of dirt upon her step...
In my perspective its a shame
all of the tears that come from pain...
Captivated in my idle thoughts, I seek to reach a...
Inner darkness shackles my soul, I am my own worst...
In the walls of this city, deep within i find...
You have taken, all that matters to me...