New Poems!! 1 for 3

I have some new poems. R/R/C 1 and I will R/R/C 3 of yours. Please tell me exactly what you think. No 1/2 liners. Ex: what you like/ dislike; point out mistakes; your opinion of it. Thank you in advance.

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I did "Whisper"

Please r/r/c on
"Taken from the mind of a prostitute"
and any other 2 you choose.

Thank you
=)

Done please r/r/c

How I Feel
It's A Dream
and
Lonely

Thanks =D

Awesome poem! Please do...

Turn the Time
Lost in Terror
Radio Talk

Done. :]

Please Do:
Cliche Crush.
And any other two from my featured list.

thankyou. :]

Ok..i will read ur poem..make sure u do the same

-Lace
-Veronica E K
-brittany on fire
-Jenni

Are done.

Anyone else?

Me. (:

Umm,
would you do . . .

The Perfect Place for the most Imperfect Person.
Doubt No More.

and any other of my most recent. (:

Im here^_^ done i did 2 as i do otheres do any of mine as you like

These are done:

-WilTED
-Ashleigh Elizabeth
-Teria Leeann
-noha

Anyone else?

Anyone?

I have read, rated, and commented the following:
-Angel
-You're The Color Illumintating My Sky
-Don't Forget To Remember Me

You may choose what ever poems you would like to R,R,C though if you would not mind I would like some opinions on "A warriors vow"

Thanks and I hope you continue to write and take what my comments and use them constructivly.
Let me know when you write something else.

Commented and Voted for:"I Wish You Knew This Song Was About You"

Please comment and vote for my latest three.

Thanks and have a pleasant read!

R/R/R'd for Angel

could you do My Abelle and Save Me Please? thankies^^ you don't have to do a third one unless you really want to

-Draven
-Shinobi
-Shirigami

Are done.

Anyone else?

Hey, great poem! I've enjoyed the read.

Could you please do:

"Taking Turns [Breaking Hearts]"
"Authority"
"Inevitable"

Thank you :)

Lost and Confused is done.

Anything else?

I did your latest one. Awesome work. ^.^
Could you please do:
"The Proud Soldier"
"Rose"
and
"Like a Mirror"

Thanks! <3

I did dont forget to remember me, it was really good,
umm,please do: would he, and control the metal, control your life, and any other one you want.
thnx :]

Done. :)

I've only got one poem.
-He Got What He Deserved.

Thanks. :)

I did "It's Over Now"

Can you do
You're In Love,
You and Me,
Wanting You
Thanks
by the way your poems are really ood.

-GothicVampyress
-pouringguilt
-EM0GiRl
-Laura4John4eva

Are done. anyone else?