Let'sTryThisOneMoreTime? [free.]

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    17 years ago

    --Closing. People are getting greedy. =[. Not cool.--

    Comments.

    Blah. I haven't been here in ages..
    And the thing is, I need to.
    Writing is how I breathe and I've been living in a smoke filled room for ages.
    I need fresh air.

    Deal:
    o1. Any poems but love and friendship.
    o2. I give honest opinions. Don't take it personally.
    o3. Give me time, I'm a little.. busy right now.
    o4. Comments on my poems/prose are loved, but aren't manditory. [however, if you do leave a comment here or there, try to leave more than one lline, please? :]]
    o5. Give me a break. Three titles or so.

    xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    17 years ago

    Anyone?
    =/.

    xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

    [edited due to language]

  • BlueEyedMystery
    17 years ago

    Wow. I can't believe no one is doing this. o.o

    It would be awsome if you would read:

    An Apple a Day Will Keep the Doctor Away

    &&

    The Obligation of a Battered Soul

    I'll read one of yours. :]

  • Blissful
    17 years ago

    Sweetest Goodbye; Treasured Memories
    thank you :]

  • Perfectly Broken
    17 years ago

    He Got What He Deserved. :]

    thankss.

  • Live WeLL
    17 years ago

    Why not be yourself?
    Damn You, Time
    What if you had the power?

    thanks! I'll check yours out too. =)

  • Teria
    17 years ago

    Honestly, I didn't realize that you'd not added poems in so long. . . I'd known there was no red number beside your name in forever, but like December? Wow.

    I hope you can get back to writing if that's what you really want. (:

    I did one. . . Umm, would you do either
    Butterflies on Fire
    - OR -
    When Flying Feels Like Falling

    Either or, doesn't matter eh.

  • noha
    17 years ago

    I got new poems and if you want all mine about love
    like hidden and i left my windo open tonight and you can r/r/c any one of mine
    realy thank you
    i will read yours now

  • Italian Stallion
    17 years ago

    Any of my poems would be greatly appreciated.

    Thanks in advance, Joe

  • NyellMoonlight
    17 years ago

    Can you please comment on "Remember The Enigma within Chimera's Eyes"?

    I'll gladly return the favor.

    Thanks :)

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    17 years ago

    Cayce--
    Done.
    Thank you for the generous comments. :].

    AblissfulDREAMER--
    Done.

    EM0GiRl--
    Done.

    PositiveAspectOfNegativeThinking--
    Done.
    And I like your screen name. :].

    Live WeLL--
    Done one, but I'll do the other two some other time..

    Everyone else--
    Be patient. I'm busy as can be and I've been... having issues a lot lately. Plus, right now, I have a headache from Hades.
    But, if anyone wants me to do more of their poems I will, and if anyone wants to read more of mine, I will return the favor.
    Thanks to everyone so far.

    xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

  • Robert
    17 years ago

    Please comment and rate the following poems

    Chrome Horse
    Century Man
    Unexpected Guest

    thanx for your time.

  • SpEcIaLmE
    17 years ago

    Hey could u please do my two featured when u have the time
    "dont try"
    "my mask'
    thanxs

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    17 years ago

    Everyone should be done.

    Thank you to everyone that commented my poem(s).

    xox.

    xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

  • Sherry Lynn
    17 years ago

    Fake smiles with crocodile tears

    and

    ultimate love

    thanks hun

    ~~Sher

  • Alex D
    17 years ago

    Don't do all of them(unless you want to), do the one(s) with the most enticing title

    Sad:
    Medicated with Moonshine, Looking for that Lunar Eclipse
    If only it was goodbye(Rather than goodnight)
    Dance! Dance! Dance

    Happy:
    Fire and Ice(Not the one with alternate ending)
    She won't think twice tonight

  • Poetic Ninja aka Papachopchop
    17 years ago

    Anything but love and friendship poem eh? Could you tell me what you think of "A jousting tradegy" then?

  • noha
    17 years ago

    Did you do mine????

  • Mezmeryz
    17 years ago

    Heya,
    will you please read 'read my lips'.
    please tell me about any improvemnts i can mke. thanks x