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  • BlueEyedMystery
    17 years ago

    I reeaalllyyy want to know what some more people think about my poem "The Obligation of a Battered Soul". I know a lot of you have already commented it, so sorry this deal isn't for you. :[

    Rules:
    1] You MUST rate.
    2] No one liners. [Yes, that includes two lines]
    3] Post back here or you don't get credit.
    4] First five people only! [That gives me 25 poems to comment. >.>]

    I always. always, always leave honest comments.

    Okay, that's iiiit. :]

    Thanks!

  • NyellMoonlight
    17 years ago

    Done :) Great poem.

    Please comment on:

    * Music Box
    * Remember The Enigma within Chimera's Eyes
    * I Climb, I Slip, I Fall Reaching For Your Hands
    * Every Little Thing She Does Is Magic
    * Chain Me to Obscurity

    Thanks a lot :)

  • Gizmo
    17 years ago

    Will do not a aprob.

    you can comment on any of mine it don't really matter :]

    x

  • Tammie
    17 years ago

    I did this, with a pretty long and honest comment. :]

    Could you please do;
    - Not Good Enough For Truth Or Cliche
    - Destination: Anywhere
    - Security Without Doubts
    - Days Plunged In Innocence
    - Questions Woven Within Silence

    Thanks heaps. :]

  • Beautiful Forever
    17 years ago

    That was absolutely AMAZING! I was completely astonished... And I did a full critique after I read it several times.

    Please do:
    My 2 latest.
    "Falling Away"
    "Taking Turns [Breaking Hearts]"
    [Any random one you choose]

    Thank you :)

  • BlueEyedMystery
    17 years ago

    Thank you everyone for your honest comments! I'm going to start on y'alls right now.

    Gizmo - You commented the wrong poem. >.> But I'm in a good mood so I'll do your poems anyway! :]

    Thanks again, everyone!

  • ASPHYXIATED
    17 years ago

    Think there's one place left? (;
    I'll do your poem now, hun.

    xx

  • BlueEyedMystery
    17 years ago

    I've done one poem. [Music Box] Go me! Sorry, I'm a bit slow today, but I'll keep working to get them done!

    SMILE - I never got your comment... o.o

  • ASPHYXIATED
    17 years ago

    Just did it there. (:
    I'm a bit slow today, also.
    Haha.

  • BlueEyedMystery
    17 years ago

    Haha, okay! I've got it now! :]

    Any specific poems you want me to comment?

  • ASPHYXIATED
    17 years ago

    Ermm;

    How bout..

    - Perfection at its finest.
    - Society.
    - Everything you got.

    Those three are new.
    I'm sorta blocked, and they're breaking my block.
    But need alot of help.

    & then ..

    - Perfections Trend.
    - Time will cure.

    (:

    Cheeeers.

  • BlueEyedMystery
    17 years ago

    Another one down [Remember The Enigma within Chimera's Eyes].

    Really, I'm sorry I'm taking forever. I'm hoping that tonight I'll feel more like commenting, since I'm a night owl. :]

  • Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden
    17 years ago

    Sure, I'll it. You don't have to do five though. You can just do one. I'm sure you're swamped from all of the others!!!!!

    ;) <3

  • Beautiful Forever
    17 years ago

    Haha, its ok... Just take your time with mine... You don't have to do them all. How about just one more from me instead of all 5. Just do "Taking Turns [Breaking Hearts]" and I'll be satisfied :)

  • BlueEyedMystery
    17 years ago

    Haha, thanks I'll keep that in mind, but I'm determinded to finish them all! I will do it. I will, I will, I will.

    Haha, I'm in a better commenting mood today, so that should help.

  • Beautiful Forever
    17 years ago

    Well if you're doing them all...

    You've completed:
    [Any Random one you choose]
    "Falling Away"

    Still Need:
    "Taking Turns [Breaking Hearts]"
    My 2 latest -- "False Pursuit" & "Dream You to Life" were my 2 latest at the time so keep those ;)

  • BlueEyedMystery
    17 years ago

    Haha, thanks for keeping up with my progress. >.>

    Let's see here. I've got... like 19 more comments to make. lmao. I think that's all of them.

  • Beautiful Forever
    17 years ago

    Oh... Sounds amazing. But since I praised your comment... *cough* *cough* -- You should be getting closer to having a higher award in the Comments thingy :P

  • BlueEyedMystery
    17 years ago

    Haha. That's awsome because it's like my #1 goal in life. NOOOT. but it does feel good to have my comments praised so thank you. :]

    *has yet to bring the 19 comments down to 18 because i've been dying easter eggs*

  • Beautiful Forever
    17 years ago

    You're dying easter eggs instead of reading my oh-so-wonderful poems? :( That hurts my feelings. Well now I'm "dying" in sorrow because you're neglecting me :(

    lol jk.

    Sounds fun, I remember when I was a kid dying easter eggs. But now I'm 20 and thats just childish. I'm doing more important things like sleeping. lol

  • BlueEyedMystery
    17 years ago

    *wipes the sweat off my forehead* Wow, so many comments. Hahaha.

    I'm finished guys! Or at least I think I am. If I missed one PM me and I'll do it. :]

    Thanks for your patience.

  • ASPHYXIATED
    17 years ago

    Thaaaaaaaaank you.
    :D

  • BlueEyedMystery
    17 years ago

    You're welcomeeeee. :]

  • Brittney Follett
    17 years ago

    Oh damn I missed it.