"My Ghost" -- 1/3

  • Beautiful Forever
    17 years ago

    As it states, if you r/r/c this I'll do 3 for you.

    Plot:
    A vision of my future ghost ;)

    RULES:
    Must comment back here to receive credit.

    Other:
    I hope you enjoy the read.
    Please leave honest comments.
    I will praise comments that are worthy.

    Warning!
    Do not overdo your critique to try to get a praise. :P

  • NyellMoonlight
    17 years ago

    Done :) Great poem.

    Please comment/rate:

    * When Words Kill
    * Seduction of the Midnight Opera
    * Red Seconds Dripping (I've Lost Control)

    Thanks in advance :)

  • Veamm
    17 years ago

    Hi!

    I've been off for awhile,
    in writing stuffs..

    and now I'm back..

    I did your piece..

    hmm, feel free to do any of mine..

    thanks!

    Veamm

  • noha
    17 years ago

    Done ,its new poem and lovely work
    can you plz do the same for me and dont forget to rate
    I DO LOVE YOU SO I WILL LET YOU GO
    HIDDEN
    WHEN YOU LOVE SOMEONE
    ANGEL
    MAGIC
    GREEN EYES
    you can do only 3 of them but i know that you do fore me before so i just dont know which one so i give you more to chose

  • Beautiful Forever
    17 years ago

    Sorry, I'm a little slow at getting to r/r/c back. :( Packing up to move... I'll get to them all I promise!

  • Michael D Nalley
    17 years ago

    I really liked it and feel you have shown great poetic skill