New Poem: "Lonely and Perfect" 1 for 2

  • Darien
    17 years ago

    Heyy.. I got a new poem out. It's called "Lonely and Perfect". If you could check it out for me, leave a comment and then post you two poems or post that you've read them. That would be totally awesome.

    So yeah, the deal is. One of mine, I read two of yours. Pretty simple stuff.

    Post your titles, or just post. I'll get back to you as soon as I can.

    Thanks,
    Darien

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  • Veamm
    17 years ago

    Hey!

    I'm done..

    hmm, can you do any of mine...

    Thanks!

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  • NyellMoonlight
    17 years ago

    Done :)

    Please do:

    * When Words Kill
    * Laments and Impressions

    Thanks in advance :)

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  • MEGZ is wondering what to do about life
    17 years ago

    You can do any of mine. but the last to are my favorites... but just choose.

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  • BlueEyedMystery
    17 years ago

    Done. :]

    Any of my featured please and thank you.

    :]]

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  • Nikki
    17 years ago

    K,done
    you're my everything
    and sit with me

    thanks
    -Nikki

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  • Michael D Nalley
    17 years ago

    Done please do my latest posts

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  • Darien
    17 years ago

    Thank you Veamm, :)

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  • Darien
    17 years ago

    Nyell

    I read both the poems you asked, very nice writes.
    Thank you :)

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  • KJ
    17 years ago

    Ok. Im all done =) Very good write. I looovvveeeddd it.

    Could you please rrc:
    "Confused & Abused"
    "Lost Life"

    Thanks in advance

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  • Darien
    17 years ago

    Meagan, I chose two poems..
    and I think I made the right choices
    I liked them!!!..

    thanks :D

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  • Darien
    17 years ago

    Thanks Cayce!!

    I did two 'random' poems from your featured poems :)

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  • Darien
    17 years ago

    Right, so I'm a bit slow...
    But I'm getting them done!!!!

    Promise :D

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  • Normal is the Watchword
    17 years ago

    Darien, do you have a youtube account?

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  • Darien
    17 years ago

    I do..

    why do you ask?

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  • Normal is the Watchword
    17 years ago

    Lol trade ya, I'll comment your poems but instead can you comment my vids?

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  • Darien
    17 years ago

    Lmao!.. ok sure that sounds like fun :D
    send me the links!..

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  • Kaila
    17 years ago

    My latest one
    and the other is your pick

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  • Darien
    17 years ago

    Engel!..

    thank you for reading.
    I loved your featured poem!

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  • Darien
    17 years ago

    Consumed by Happiness..

    Wow.

    Two very well written poems. Thank you for reading, and thank you for posting those poems!

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  • Darien
    17 years ago

    A few more to go, but like I said, I will have them done!!!

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  • Darien
    17 years ago

    Ok, I will get some of these done later today..
    I have not forgotten :)

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  • Darien
    17 years ago

    Nikki,

    I could not find "Sit with me"
    so I read another poem that had a close enough title. "I sit here today"

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  • Jacqui Armstrong
    17 years ago

    Great poem =)
    ur a talented writer! i gave it 5/5!

    if you could please read "broken" and any other of your choice i would be greatful =)

    Thanx so much and let me know if you want any others reading!

    Love
    Jacs
    xxxx

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  • Darien
    17 years ago

    Thanks Michael..
    eventually finished yours : P

    Kaylee.. I hope those comments showed up!..

    thank you :D

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  • Darien
    17 years ago

    XxHypothetically Speakingxx

    sorry for the delay.. I've been pretty busy.

    thank you :)

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  • Robert
    17 years ago

    Please Comment and vote one the following poems

    My All And All
    Hunters Of Humans

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  • Normal is the Watchword
    17 years ago

    Yes Darien, thank you so much

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  • CHEMICALcaitlin
    17 years ago

    Hi could you please do any 2 of mine. you are an amazing writer. i gave it 5/5

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  • Darien
    17 years ago

    Weird.. I didnt get any comments from the last two ppl.. but whatever. I still need to catch up.. *sigh*

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  • Darien
    17 years ago

    Kaila.. I did two of yours.

    I think I commented on onoe of yours twice.
    A HUGE difference in my comments.

    I guess I've matured as a critic as well..

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  • Alvaro
    17 years ago

    Replaced
    Darkness envy us

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  • Darien
    17 years ago

    Thanks Alvaro!..

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  • Darien
    17 years ago

    Thank you soso.

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