Sad & Love Titles... my first contest... be nice please :)

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3 people per title
2 titles/ poems per person
you may not sign up for the same one twice

i think that's it, just pm me or comment on the forum if i've forgotten anything

Here are the titles:

Little Girl, You're Tears Aren't Needed Here
-Cayce
-xPinkDizzyTeac upx
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Imperfect
-LiquidSugar
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Don't Cry, Mommy's Here
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Pretend You Don't Feel the Pain
-Nikki
-Lizaveta
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Live, Breathe, Bleed
-NyellMoonlight
-Ashes of a Black Rose
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Try, Fail, and Pretend You Don't Feel Their Disappointment
-Hellon *DONE*(rrc)
-Decay In The Dark
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The Words I Needed to Hear
-NyellMoonlight
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Love Until Pain is a Distant Memory
-NinjaGirl *DONE*
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Can You Feel Her Pain
-NinjaGirl *DONE*
-elizabeth keller *DONE*
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Kiss Her Tears Away
-Dark Secrets
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Do You Love Me Daddy?
-Ashes of a Black Rose
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Unmasked
-Patrick Murphy *DONE*
-xoOrdinaryGirl ox
-Lizaveta

Need
-SensesCaptureL ace*DONE*
-elizabeth keller *DONE*
-Shapeless

Pretending
-SensesCaptureL ace *DONE*
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Lost In A World Of Lies
-Patrick Murphy *DONE*
-xoOrdinaryGirl ox
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Am I Good Enough Yet
-xPinkDizzyTeac upx *DONE*
-XxRomancing the Darker SidexX
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Beautiful?
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Hold Her Close
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1st Place winner: 6r/r/c
2nd Place winner: 5r/r/c
3rd Place winner: 4r/r/c
There will be two honorable mentions and they will each get 2 r/r/c's

And remember, the ones not mentioned or in lower places are not there because their poems aren't mentionable, so far I haven't read a single poem or seen a profile with poems that weren't completely AMAZING!!! Every person has a different style or styles of writing and I'm most likely to base it on the style I like best and the feeling I get from it. THANK YOU everyone for entering. I really enjoy reading your poems.

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Little Girl, You're Tears Aren't Needed Here

Please and thank you!

Great titles. :]

The Words I Needed To Hear && Live, Breathe, Bleed

Thanks :)

Unmasked
and
lost in a world of lies

thank you

Unmasked
by PMurphy

Hiding behind these walls
of paper thin delights.
I am ashamed for you to embrace
any views of my light.

Wishing ones not be true
for i wish you not to see me.
Hiding behind paper thin delights
as for thou shalt see thee.

Minuscule moments make my views
as though nonexistent.
For these paper thin delights
are almost luministic.

Everything around flowing
like the air of a ghost breathing back.
Every paper thin delight
continues to keep on track.

Locked in my closet, beaten with poles
i have been brutalized by nothing but myself
every paper thin delight in front my eyes
continues to reflect ones selfish belt.

But now i decide as for thy ply.
To step up past all these...
Paper thin delights
Let the mask be unfolded like the trees,

Continue to blossom past the reasons
for my life and happiness are grander things
for a message hidden so paper thin.
Unmasking the life it brings.

Lost in a World of Lies
by
PMurphy

My sky is red.

The ground is above.

Gravity pushes me up,
instead of down.

Enigma's are understandable.

While ghosts have mass.

I am trapped in a world,
where its as if I'm past.

Water doesn't flow.

And air is solid.

Taking breaths,
are now choking on acid.

People are now imagination.

While fables are now stories.

Seems like the dragons,
are creating the children their worries.

I am trapped in a world.

Where everything fake is real.

I am trapped in this world,
oh how i wish my mind could reel.

Little Girl, You're Tears Aren't Needed Here
&&
Am I Good Enough Yet

Thanks
x

Am I Good Enough Yet?

And everyday is painful, constantly seems I'm shaking
Tears pooling in these eyes, this heart is slowly breaking
Nails become so weak and brittle, hair gone dry and flat
Dropping pounds every day but all that I can see is fat

Feeling my heartbeat quickly becoming weaker every day
Trusted you to help yet you silently watch my life decay
Tell me what I did to deserve this pain, why choose me
Are you happy now you've left me in complete misery?

The exercise is getting longer, always feeling so weak
Constantly you promised I'd achieve a good physique
But now it seems that all you ever do is yell and insult
No matter how much I lose, never happy with the result

Don't know how much longer I can keep up this facade
Swore to always be here for me, so why do I feel betrayed
Can feel this body slowly shutting down, so tired of crying
Meant to help me, but you have left me alone and dying

So take a good look at what you have made me become
Can see you smiling because you know that you've won
Worked your charm on me, clearly you have no regrets
Slowly dying, so tell me Ana...am I good enough yet?

Try, Fail, and Pretend You Don't Feel Their Disappointment

thnx!

Unmasked
&&
Lost In A World Of Lies

Thanku :)

Please reserve

Need

Thank you.

Kiss Her Tears Away

Pretend You Don't Feel the Pain

Title: Unmasked
Written by: XoOrdinaryGirloX

So cold, so lonely, so quiet, so alone,
Hidden among the anxiety created.
So lost, so afraid, so weak, so crushed,
Unaware of the anguish as she rested.

Something inside just makes him snap,
He's injured her, though never like this before,
His shouting escalates and she awakes,
Then suddenly she ends up on the floor.

Tears roll silently down her cheeks,
She fixes her stare on him, confused and dazed,
Clutching her stomach as tight as possible,
Frighted at the side of him he just portrayed.

He rushes off again, shocked at what he'd done,
Whilst she's left, struggling for breath,
Looking down, blood started seeping through,
She realized, she was close to death.

Grabbing a pen with what little strength she has,
She begins to write on the nearest wall,
"You've finally reavealed your true side to me"
And with no more life left to give, to floor she falls.

He comes back, finding her lying there, lifeless,
Realizing what he has done, he cries out for help,
Though now beyond help, he hugs her once more,
Just goes to show, what can lie behind closed doors.

Kiss her tears away

Spacious is the room around her
Yet her shadow dwells a corner
Silence broken by sniffs and gasps
Accompanied by the darkened walls

Living but dead, enchantedly weeping
Over the soulless body she'd become
Bruises crawl beneath her delicate skin
An emotional virus rips her heart

A conference of a million held in her head
Playing videos blotted by a melancholical past
Coercing her brain to throb in excruciating pain
Swollen eyes forcing bloody crimson tears

Prisoner of this vainful realm of depression
Under the rule of it's stark king of demise
She awaits her prince; her guardian angel
Wishing him to fly her away to the heavens blue

But she doesn't need him to snatch her spirit away
All she needs is your tender loving care
A kiss to free her from the virtual tormenting jail
Go on before it sucks her soul, Kiss her tears away

*You should make 3 winners, and 2 honorable mentions. The 2 honorable mentions get 2 r/r/c's and the 3 winners get what you stated*

Need

Infectious cravings of a deep memory
prick the inside of my conscience.
Sweet reminders of a love now lost
enervate my knees,
causing a crash without end.

Oh, how the memory of you still sticks like taffy;
stuck, and tongue tied.
The longing for your touch, your voice,
makes me sick.

Nauseating thoughts of an obsessive desire;
I am yours.
Let me bend to your will.
A slave to some, devoted to you.

Tears freeze like ice upon my lips.
An addiction I wish not to overcome.
A love like yours, lost or gained,
is my only necessity to survival.

Please reserve:
"Daddy Do You Love Me" and
"Live, Breathe, Bleed" for me. THANKS SO MUCH!!

I think I'm going to do another one.

So can you please reserve for me

Pretending

Thank you =)

Please reserve

love until pain is a distant memory

thank you

Love Until Pain Is A Distant Memory

Love until pain is a distant memory
Lost forever upon the wailing winds
Love until hurt is just a shadow
That tempts your heart, within.

Cry until the injury is faded
As you live a life so jaded
Lost within stone cold eyes
Full of deception and full of lies.

Trust until you can trust no more
Then throw yourself against the floor
Scream and yell and cry and shout
Soon, they will let you out.

Love until your heart bursts
Love until it doesnt hurt
Love until you cant help but cry
Love until pain is a distant memory,
Left behind.

©opyrighted by ~NinjaGirl~

Please also reserve

can you feel her pain

thank you

I will reserve under the title "Need", please.

Will u sign me up for "Can You Feel Her Pain"
and "Need" thanks

Reserve the titles "Can You Feel Her Pain"
and "Need" thanks

Can you feel her pain its coming up around us... Its holding us tight and now i dont know how to escape it. Her pain is strong for she has been hurt. She is hurt by all and loved by none. Can you feel her pain its dark and scary...I want her pain to go away but yet it is still strong. She has fought the pain and kept it inside and now it wont leave...she wont liet it. Can you feel her pain its almost here but yet its little now she has released and now its little. It doesn't hurt her anymore and wont bother her once more. Can you feel her pain as it leaves...leaves her body and leaves her heart as she becomes one, once more

NEED
I need you now and needed you then
Where were you when i needed you the most
I need you more than ever now that the pain is here
I need you to tell me it will be alright and i need you to tell me its ok
I need you more than anyone but yet your not here
My pain makes me need you more and the more i need the more pain i have
I need you like air
I need you to breath...you are everything so there for i need you
I needed you yesterday but yet you were not there and i need you today but you didnt come
Why is it always when i need you the most that you seem to disappear
I need you now and i needed you then but guess you didn't care to even need me

Can you feel her pain

Can you feel her pain
As it wells up inside
Covering up the tears
That she always cries?

Can you feel her pain
As she tries to cry it out?
Can you hear her silent screams
Of pain, neglect and doubt?

Can you feel her pain
As she smiles to make it numb?
Can you hear her heart
Beating like a drum?

Can you feel her pain
As she cuts it away,
Slashing and slicing
At a world that is so grey?

Can you feel her pain
As she bleeds it all away?
Do you know how you made her feel
Because she was your mistake?

Did you ever feel her pain
Or did you just pretend that everything was fine?
Is it ok for you
That your little girl is dying?

©opyrighted by ~NinjaGirl~

Pretend you don't feel the pain

and

unmasked

:)

The Words I Needed To Hear

Teardrop breathes, inhaling essence of hyacinths,
mistaken for translucent passer-buy, once again,
gliding down the face in rhythm of weary heartbeats.

Sorrow drips through adamant words, replaying
with notes of decaying sunsets. Memories die.

Teardrop sleeps on the tongue doused with lies,
slaying all those words I needed to hear,
gliding down the soul with numbed awareness.

Pretending

One glance, that one second moment in time,
feels like eternity.
I tremble as my heart begins to race;
closing my eyes to dream of those sweet whispers
I long for.

Your smile is as beautiful as a rainbow
after a hurricane.
I sigh in disbelief that this could be anything
but love.

My mind becomes blank as you walk by;
for I would not know what to say
if you acknowledged my presence.

I will continue the dream of us
even if I'm told I shouldn't,
because for all those precious moments
I feel as if I belong.

I love you-
and though I'd never show it,
I'd certainly never deny it.

Live, Breathe, Bleed

Mirrors, mirrors everywhere, shatter frail sight-

Crystal day behind the curtains peers within her mind
as she plays with adjectives of infrared sighs.
Demonic damsels grin, twisting shallow lies-
they're all sinners, decaying modesty's filling blank pages
of electric impulses which built combusting disguise.
Erotic darkness dances, molding fragrant demise-
within their grim fire, blatant phoenixes arise.

Mirrors, mirrors everywhere, reflect hollow eyes.

Pretend You Don't Feel the Pain
Beautiful?

Am I Good Enough Yet? please.

Am I Good Enough yet?

Rejection, amazment, sympathy,
The cycle continues,
Uninterrupted.
Red agony spills out
From under my chest:
You make the moment seem so perfect.

I march along, a quiet soldier,
I practice nightly, to win affection.
Tell me, just what do you seek?
Perfection is not possible,
From a "failure" like me.

Am I experienced enough yet?
I've still got my sanity,
And my pride and dignity.
But is it enough?
Is that good enough for you?

Is the world perfect yet?
I trust it is not.
Nothing will ever be good enough,
Good enough for you.

But am I at least close?
I pose one last question:
Am I good enough yet?

Could I please have Imperfect?

Cheers xo

Im so sorry
But could you please cancel my reservations??

I reserved:

"Beautiful"
"Pretend You Dont Feel The Pain"

Sorry again

Live, Breathe, Bleed

Little beads of red and clear,
Bloody droplets, crimson sleeve,
Hope and faith fade into tears,
Watching painful lovers leave.

All we do, we feel this need,
To live, and love, to breathe and bleed

Never, never, find forever,
Eternity’s not love,
Healing wounds from heart’s endeavor,
Through blade and kick and shove.

All we do, we feel this need,
To live, and love, to breathe and bleed.

The droplets settle on the sham,
Resentments darkened stain,
Blade in only helping hand,
Tainted with disdain.

All we do, we feel this need,
To live, and love, to breathe and bleed

Try, Fail, and Pretend You Don't Feel Their Disappointment

A song smeared with the rigid ache of a stagnancy,
blinded by the blissful damage in a euphoric oddity.
Buried in plethora of thoughts that writhe in savage innocence,
we calm ourselves to our mistakes in a rueful opulence.

Nights of enamoured lies etched in our beating minds,
confused by the verity that slipped in the static times.
Words that has lost all traces of salvaged meaning,
you fervently instigate the abode of my ardent pleading.

With the final silence that sleeps within our hearts,
we bade a farewell oath to this love that slowly departs.
A plague that solidify the impeding of a treasured smile,
I stand in blistered forlorn and let the tears fall for a while.

After some time of wasted breaths in fatigue admiration,
we turned away from this unspoken desolation.
Bewail this sodomised sorrow and rage assembled,
to try, fail and pretend you don't feel their disappoinment.

Deadline is now may 31 everyone!!! sorry for any inconveniences

When will the winners be announced? The following day?

Oh, and I submitted "Pretending" and you didn't mark it as DONE. Just thought I'd let you know about that. =)