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- Name : Jad
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- Posts : 2864
Jad
16 years ago

I have this new poem called "funeral" And I need or want some feed back on it.
If you do I will comment on any three of your poems. Give titles if you want specific ones.

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- Name : Michael D Nalley
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Michael D Nalley
16 years ago

Please do "The unforgiving"

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- Name : Jad
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- Posts : 2864
Jad
16 years ago

Done and is there anybody else??????

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- Name : Gizmo
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- Posts : 560
Gizmo
16 years ago

Done

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- Name : Jad
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Jad
16 years ago

Done with Gizmo and is there Anybody else???????

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- Name : Jad
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- Joined : Aug 26, 2008
- Posts : 2864
Jad
16 years ago

Done with "It Happen One Night"

Is there Anybody else?????

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- Name : Hollymariee
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- Joined : Mar 31, 2007
- Posts : 172
Hollymariee
16 years ago

Would you do It Wasn't Him Who Picked Up The Pieces pleeease ?

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- Name : Jad
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Jad
16 years ago

I did that one and did u want me to do any others
Is there Anybody else????????

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Name : BlueEyedMystery
Status : Senior Member
Joined : Apr 28, 2006
Posts : 1744

Done. :]

When The Stars Come out
Silence [Killer]

Don't Believe Them [The Stars Lie]
^^
That one's explicit, so if you don't feel comfortable reading that one you can do:

Falling Forever.. Or Not [Prose]

Thank you!
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- Name : Jad
- Status : Senior Member
- Joined : Aug 26, 2008
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Jad
16 years ago

Done with cayce now.

Is there anybody else.

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