~* One for two ? <3

Please comment on Treasures Don't Make Up For Loving Measures, ++ The Mind's Treason & I'll return the favour for two of yours for one, and three for both . Please leave titles so I know who to give comments !
Thanks , Holly Mariee
xoxo

I will

But please do any of mine you wish i don't like leaving titles

Please and thank you

Please do Poetry and the Press

Desperate Attempt
Alone In The Cold (If you check right after this post it wont be here I'm adding it in, in about 5 minutes!!)

k I'm on it :)

I lied its called How cold it is alone, not alone in the cold!

Okaay , any one else ?

Id love to read it and I will lol just when I get home from work tonight cing as i leave in twenty annnddd have not gotten ready yet. ^ ^

Poised To KIll
Muse

xoxo - thank you!!
btw i look 4ward to reading your new work the last time I had read some it was very good.

Done can you do the lonely joker and miserable

Thank you guys so much , any one else ?

Thank your for the insight I went back through and I can see what you mean, I skip from rhyme to rythm, hmm....

My bad I did the minds treason = )

The devil has the last laugh please
Thank you!!!

Anyone else ?

Hi Holly. I commented both of your poems...The first one probably a little too in depth but it struck me!
Well here are my three titles. BTW my name is ReBecca.
"Making This Love"...."Therefore I Am"..."A Way To Cope"...I write in a lot of different genre's...so these aren't just one category. Hope you like them! :)