How do you like this??

Could you be kind enough and tell me how you like this? My poem aquarium:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s-WrGdYd5jY&list=HL1389356854&feature=mh_lolz

It is like a bomb of art, where chaos and harmony are unexistant.

I like it a lot ,but don't think it would take anything away if the words were posted under the YT . I like the internal rhyme but find it harder to absorb the deeper meaning that I sense is beneath the surface . I have mostly a one track mind that gets derailed easily

Thank you two so much.
Dear Michael I posted the poem under there in YouTube

Not for me...it doesn't make sense in my scale of sensibility?

I know it is quiet understandable that unfortunately this one makes sense in a realm that less people could venture into.

Being popular, in which like everyone else I like, for me is always a temptation or a distraction, not THE goal.

I feel the poem itself had a profound imagery to think of and the vid wasn't a necessary aspect of it, as it kinda actually distracted me. Otherwise the way it was read was good and the poem was good as well! :)

Thanks

Thomas, perhaps you mean harmony and chaos are indistinguishable .

Thanks Hellon for honesty. This is what most of the time expected from you. Haha I did not said all the time because you are not me:) :) (see my ego is getting big_ it is the opposite reaction to the lack of acknowledgment )

Your last two posts didn't quite make sense to me either if I'm honest...especially when you got Thomas mixed up with some random human called Robert who has not posted on this thread...I see you've corrected that but...still...I can't figure out what you're saying anyway?

It must be difficult to control an ego when so many alter egos are involved I imagine?

Haha didn't they teach you to do not brag about a mistake that is already fixed? Where is your manners??

The same way that some of my works doesn't make sense to you. :) ;)

People don't brag about the mistakes made by others...at least not that I'm aware of...they are pointed out in the hope that an explanation for the error will be given I think...Anyway...in a previous thread you accused someone (Narph I believe) of trying to avoid/mislead a situation...aren't you doing this right now?

Why do you need explanation about a minor mistake like this ?? Specially after it was fixed??

About Narph I do not know or remember what you're talking about.

I think we both know that I was not referring to the little minor mistake in a name although there are absolutely no similarities between Robert and Thomas that I can see.

Your reply to Narph from the So?? thread

Narp your clever inclination to sidetracks can not erase the main path. As I always said : you can hide behind obvious but you never could hide behind transparency.

Someone were reading my posts haha I am surprised.
There we were talking about something serious. Here I was casually responding to you in a joking mood. then you asked me about why I mistook Robert with Thomas, after I already corrected it, in which I do not feel even to waste air time to explain. I do not argue just for the sake of excitement.

Okay tell me what is that I were "avoiding/misleading" in this situation? Please enlighten me.
how did I hide behind obvious or where did I failed being transparent?? Please give me some insight!!

Now I can't be sure, but I -think- Hellon is insinuating that you have multiple accounts that you employ to corroborate your own opinions.

*Leans back into armchair, puffs lazily on pipe*

O really how does she deduce that from mistaking Robert with Thomas I want to know ? This is not only the result of insufficient logic it is also either paranoiac or ill will insinuation.
First if I have a multiple account it is not her business to chase me and harass me on and on she only could notify the mods and they easily could verify that by checking my IP address in case if it is illegal.
But it sounds most likely another plot against me.

It is also either paranoiac or ill will insinuation.

^^^

No...it's neither and...I am not chasing you or harassing you in any way. This is the first time I've brought the subject up with you in fact.

But it sounds most likely another plot against me.

^^^

Now, THIS sounds like paranoia on your part. It's not the fist time you've brought this subject up.

I think we both know that I was not referring to the little minor mistake in a name although there are absolutely no similarities between Robert and Thomas that I can see.

--- Both of them have no pictures. Just saying.

*** does the same as sibs, except that a minute later, I cough my way to sleep*

When I said I saw no similarities in both names I meant they sound nothing alike....just saying...

Why do you lie??
It is the second time, do you remember about the guy who later change his name to "The deepest Essence"?? Do you need me to refresh your memory or your insomnia is an episodic component of your paranoia??

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It seem that you are there to get me somehow
I either laugh at the death of innocent people in sep 11 or have multiple accounts all over the place like mushrooms popping out wherever I walk. It seems your are preparing the ground for my disappearance again.

No....actually it's the first time I've brought it up with you. I did ask Nin if he was you and...if I remember correctly you were the first to jump in and deny it...My question was not directed at you in that thread so...I thought Nin should have been given the chance to answer first.

So you see...there is absolutely nothing wrong with my memory.

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So then this is the second time.
You insinuating someone else is me and then expect me to not to jump in because you acused him of being me , not me of being him?? How dishonest you are by twisting the words like this. So I do not need to talk to you no more!!

No...I didn't insinuate nor did I accuse...I asked a question, there is a huge difference. I'm not sure how asking a question makes me dishonest and...since you say you no longer wish to speak to me...I guess I'll never know.

As for checking your ip address well...is there any point in that? I mean...if you have access to other computers through Uni/working in IT etc then you have the opportunity to access different addresses...sure your location would show up as being in the same area but...I've heard there's something called relays that can change your location without you having to board a plane and actually go anywhere?

Haha I see black ants are wiggling and crawling all over you mask on your avatar. I did not see these for so long thanks for inviting them back.
now that you got their attention they would never let you go.

And I see Federico Lorca on your avatar :)

Perfect time to share, no?

Before the Dawn
Federico Garcia Lorca

But like love
the archers
are blind

Upon the green night,
the piercing saetas
leave traces of warm
lily.

The keel of the moon
breaks through purple clouds
and their quivers
fill with dew.

Ay, but like love
the archers
are blind!

Is this your way, wildly accusing people based on ( such slim) possibility? It is only barbarians law that does not even need the prove, just a supposition is enough to condemn people.
that by itself tells is the front page of our identities more then what we pretend in our poetry.....!
So tell me Hellon why really are you doing this?
Why aren't you accusing others , only me??
Because I speak my mind?? Because my clarity is inaccessible to you by nature?? Do you envy my horse?? Who feeds you with those information about IP? who is with you in this??

Do not worry those ant are like termites. They feed of your soul in darkness. but if you are solid your soul would be like robber to them

He and Paul Eluard are my passion (beside A. Shamloo _ my mentor)
I really Love this from him
My open translation of one of his verse:

My best poem
my best song
the one that I would never sing
is resting upon my tongue.

Perfect choice Mel...I do love this poem and..wasn't he a handsome man to boot!

I have not accused anyone or condemned them...there is no law against having two accounts on this site but...you should make it know that you have two...anymore than that is against the rules last time I looked. I suggested you had more than two...so far you have defended but not denied this.

I don't envy your horse ....nor you...or what you call "your clarity" for that matter ... I think my brain may fry if I tried.

My soul...what soul?

Really what soul??

No, I do not have to lie, because you forcing me to

you are not accusing me?? Is any better word for shame??

Stop editing your posts without saying EDIT....please!

I'm not asking you to lie but I do note that you have not answered my question so far so...do you have more than one account on here...<<<< it's very plain now...direct...cannot be side stepped????

Okay I answer this question that is not righteously asked righteously provided by you answering my righteous question.....!
NO I DON'T!!!!!
And even years ago(6-7) that I did have, I did never abuse that to compliment my own poems. This slime only is in the mind of those who mistake me with who they really are and their own deeds.

So if you have any grain of fairness in your soul answer me now:: Why me?? Why do you keep asking me, not any one else?? What is your grudge against me??

F**K ...you edited this one too before I could even respond!!!

Haha do not hide
You are exposed....!

Yeah..well..what ever...Who Want's to be a millionaire is on tv right now and I really like to stimulate my brain at least once a day so...can I put you on hold for now???

Go ahead
I am a millionaire in my heart!!