Formed Poetry Challenge #2

  • Darren replied to Everlasting
    6 years ago

    This is great Luce, they do mess with your brain.

  • Mr. Darcy replied to Everlasting
    6 years ago, updated 6 years ago

    Float
    Up up...
    Now, oh now

    Float away, float
    Onto clouds, onto
    Rivers within rivers
    Melting those dreams, those melting...

    Never seen again, seen never
    Open, is this mind, this, is, open
    Trailing, ever, dreaming, ever trailing..
    ^
    Editing now - not fun at all :p
    ...
    Done, I think?