Weekly Contest Results Monday July 6th

  • Meena Krish
    2 years ago

    Good morning everyone,
    Here are the awaited results/comments. Thank you judges for your
    weekly time and effort! Congratulations to the front page Winners:
    Walter, Mr Darcy and Ravven; and well done to those who received
    a HM! Good writing everyone!

    WINNERS://:

    Deforestation – Haiku by Walter (10+4)

    Too sad… (English Sonnet) by Mr.Darcy (10)

    Angels (Senryu chain) by Rayven (10)

    COMMENTS://:

    Angels (Senryu chain) by Rayven (10 points)

    This senryu string is so elegant, and flows beautifully, it was
    wonderful to read and the message brought me to tears. This
    piece is uplifting, emotional and one many should read. Truly
    love this poem.
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    Deforestation – Haiku by Walter (10 points)

    A haiku with a powerful message we all need to heed. If we
    continue to deplete the forests, then it won’t just be the trees
    that are falling.
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    Deforestation - Haiku by Walter (4 points)

    Sorrowful, and powerful Haiku- A poem that represents what
    is going on in the world to date.
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    Too sad… (English Sonnet) by Mr.Darcy (10 points)

    This piece resonated a lot with me because it shows the highs and lows
    of relationships and what happens when relationships (of any kind)
    go wrong for we seemingly blame ourselves and wonder if there was
    anything more we could do but generally it says more about them as a person,
    not us although no matter how we feel about this, it still hurts and this shines
    through this piece a lot. The words chosen make this even more difficult to read.

    HM://:

    Fire In The Woods by Jemia de Blondeville (4)

    The Garden Waltz by Maple Tree (7)

    He Forgot my Name by Maple Tree (4)

    Drift by Obscure (7)

    Anarchy In Arcadia by cassie hughes (7)

    COMMENTS://:

    Fire In The Woods by Jemia de Blondeville (4 points)

    There’s nothing better than afternoon spent on acid. The wonders
    your tripping mind can conjure are ‘ethereal’. I found this poem
    pleasing and was in awe of this poet’s creativity.
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    The Garden Waltz by Maple Tree (7 points)

    I absolutely loved the format of this piece. When a poet uses space
    as well as words to draw the reader in, to me, they have transformed
    the ordinary into extraordinary.
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    He Forgot my Name by Maple Tree (4 points)

    This piece really spoke to me because I felt every word, every stanza...
    Maple, always does this with her poetry and I can only say that the
    imagery was amazing although a sad piece it was amazing. If only I
    could take away yet pain, I would.
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    Drift by Obscure (7 points)

    This piece was very pertinent and I don't think it was just for me but
    would be for many people who may come across it and read it. We have
    all suffered one way or another in life mainly due to other's words so
    understandably you'll be questioning things as to why you feel this way
    with good family and friends around but it's very common to feel lonely
    even when you're not alone.
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    Anarchy In Arcadia by cassie hughes (7 points)

    This poem was unique, magical, mystical and wonderful. An arcade
    game coming to life. I loved the visual display, as I was reading, the
    colors and characters came to life. A powerful mystical

  • Larry Chamberlin replied to Meena Krish
    2 years ago, updated 2 years ago

    I love it when formed poetry gets recognized, but to have all three front pagers be formed poems is magnificent!

    Congrats to Rayven, Walter and Michael and to the honorably mentioned.

    Thanks, judges and thanks Meena for posting.

  • cassie hughes
    2 years ago

    Congratulations to all three front page winners, some truly wonderful poems this week. Thanks too for the lovely comment on my own and the HM :)

  • Em
    2 years ago

    Thanks Meena for hosting and to all the judges.

    Congratulations to all winners and HM's

  • Poet on the Piano
    2 years ago

    Congrats to all! Thanks to Meena for hosting, and many thanks to our judges as well. Take care, everyone!