PLZ I NEED HONEST CRITICS!!!!!

I commented on one of your poems the key word is addiction I am a recovering alcoholic. I wonder if the twelve steps would work for a cutter please read my poem Natural Choices I have many cyber friends who identify thierselfs as cutters your poem ended with an element of hope I like that.

I read a few, check out mine

allright..plzz comment on my untitled poem...