Just give me the list and you've got my vote and a real comment!

  • Rolo
    20 years ago

    Hey, I'm just looking for some feed back on my latest poem. It's entitled "Distorted Fairy Tale". I tried out something different and I'd like to know your thoughts. If you can do that, I'll read, vote, and comment on the list you give me. Thanks a lot!

    ~rolo

  • Ashley Van Eperen
    20 years ago

    :) sure.
    please check out only three...
    they are..
    daddys little girl
    my promise
    hope

    thanks!

  • Rolo
    20 years ago

    You got it! Anyone else?

  • Rolo
    20 years ago

    C'mon...it's a good deal...you know you want to say yes.

  • Kris Lynn
    20 years ago

    Can't turn down a bargain.

    Can you please read "Reach Out" and any other ones that jump out at you?

    Thanks in advance...and I will read yours as well.

    ~*~Christina Lynn~*~

  • Rolo
    20 years ago

    Absolutely. C'mon now...I'm awake and will read within 5 minutes!

  • David Paul
    20 years ago

    ok. If you could please read my newest 2. I would be more than thankfull. kilman = David B. off to read yours.

  • Rolo
    20 years ago

    No problem!

  • Kris Lynn
    20 years ago

    Your poem was AWESOME! I hope you dont mind, but I printed it out so I can share it with my fiance. Again....AWESOME!

    ~*~Christina Lynn~*~

  • Kris Lynn
    20 years ago

    Thanks for the comments, as well!

  • Rolo
    20 years ago

    Oh, wow thanks. I don't mind at all, I'm honored you would share my work. Once again thanks for your time!

  • midnight♥lullibys
    20 years ago

    awsome....please read when you have the time no rush!

    letting go of my fears
    x-sent-x
    prisoner
    holding back(if you dont have time...skip this one.)
    one more night

  • Rolo
    20 years ago

    Of course I'll read them. Later on though, because all of a sudden I don't feel so good. But keep 'em coming, I'll get to them soon enough, I promise. I need to go lay down for now. Thanks a lot!

  • Poetic Tragedy08
    20 years ago

    Do whicheve ryou want! thanx!

  • ღ Christina ღ
    20 years ago

    sure can you check out my latest poem "I can’t believe You Will Be Gone" thanks

  • Chad
    20 years ago

    Okay....do whatever ones you want.

  • Rolo
    20 years ago

    You got it. Erica, I'll read yours soon. Just keep em coming and I'll catch up tomorrow.

  • undying blusher
    20 years ago

    i'll read, vote, and comment on a bunch of yours. i'd appreciate any feedback. pick any or all...thanks.

  • EoB
    20 years ago

    Oh, cool.

    The River

    The Enslavement of Beauty

    The Suction of Souls

    Losing an Angel

  • Emilia
    20 years ago

    Great poem you've written!! I voted and commented on it!

    Please read:

    "Endless Love"
    "You're Never Far Away"
    "A Short Poem About Pain"
    "My Dream Boy Doesen't Exist"

    thanks a lot.. I will return the favour If you want me to.. hugs to you

  • Rolo
    20 years ago

    Okay, I've read as many as I could, but not all. I promised you all a real comment so this will take time. But I am leaving for about a week. When I get back I promise I will finish them because I don't want to just say "Great job, 5/5". So keep the requests coming if you'd like, I'll get to them eventually. And thank you for all of your comments on my poem, I appreciate it. Take care all.

    ~rolo