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- Name : ASPHYXIATED
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ASPHYXIATED
20 years ago

And we will do it as fast as we can :)
And try give helpful critque(sp?)

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- Name : ASPHYXIATED
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ASPHYXIATED
20 years ago

What poems you want us to read?

And well I think we just enjoy reading poetry(did i pop up after you again?)

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- Name : ASPHYXIATED
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ASPHYXIATED
20 years ago

sure I"ll get on it now :)

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- Name : ASPHYXIATED
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ASPHYXIATED
20 years ago

Darn, I could be a stalker(jk).

anyhoo what poems you want us to read?

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- Name : ASPHYXIATED
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ASPHYXIATED
20 years ago

Well I check out some anyway :)

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- Name : Tainted Beauty
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Tainted Beauty
20 years ago

roam the night (my new one:D )
im writing
under the darkness
do you want

please :D

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- Name : ASPHYXIATED
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ASPHYXIATED
20 years ago

me to, anyone at all?

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- Name : jencam
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jencam
20 years ago

fairy tale reality check and any others please

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- Name : ASPHYXIATED
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ASPHYXIATED
20 years ago

doned :)

where James go?

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- Name : ASPHYXIATED
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ASPHYXIATED
20 years ago

come on!!

x_X

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- Name : Brookeáƒ¦
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Brookeáƒ¦
20 years ago

Lisa would you please read
Scores of Tears
Raindrops
Downward Spiral
I really aprreciate it~
Thank you =)

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- Name : ASPHYXIATED
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ASPHYXIATED
20 years ago

Sure Brooke I love your stuff :)

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- Name : Brookeáƒ¦
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Brookeáƒ¦
20 years ago

Do you have any poems you would like me to read?

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- Name : ASPHYXIATED
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ASPHYXIATED
20 years ago

Any but you have read most mine :)

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- Name : SaraR
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SaraR
20 years ago

No purpose in my life
Were you the one?

I'm new to writing poetry so any suggestions/comments good or bad are appreciated.

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- Name : ASPHYXIATED
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ASPHYXIATED
20 years ago

done and done :)

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Name : ASPHYXIATED
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sorry I was doing them but not saying they were done cause im sorta in a mix up trying to sneak guys outta my house..don't ask just read :)http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/discussion/top
ic.html?topic_id=26432

any one else?

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ASPHYXIATED
20 years ago

James is gonna have alot tomorrow :|

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- Name : SaraR
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SaraR
20 years ago

Thanks for the comments!!!

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- Name : ASPHYXIATED
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ASPHYXIATED
20 years ago

Welcome :)

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- Name : ASPHYXIATED
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ASPHYXIATED
20 years ago

Hey could you tell me which one or two??

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- Name : Tainted Butterfly
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Tainted Butterfly
20 years ago

Can you comment/rate:

Soulmates Never Die

TY!

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- Name : ASPHYXIATED
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ASPHYXIATED
20 years ago

stacie your done and tb im on it :)

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ASPHYXIATED
20 years ago

done and welcome :)

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- Name : ASPHYXIATED
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ASPHYXIATED
20 years ago

Anybody else??
anyone?

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- Name : Tainted Butterfly
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Tainted Butterfly
20 years ago

thank you everyone! :)

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- Name : ASPHYXIATED
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ASPHYXIATED
20 years ago

Thank you tb for your comments :D

Sure stacie :) James will be happy :D

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- Name : ASPHYXIATED
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ASPHYXIATED
20 years ago

:D:D:D:D:D:D

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- Name : ASPHYXIATED
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ASPHYXIATED
20 years ago

sure teys and other person(sori bad with names) just rates or comments 2?

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- Name : Tainted Butterfly
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Tainted Butterfly
20 years ago

Can you guys rate/comment my song

Someday

I would also appreciate that!

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- Name : ASPHYXIATED
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ASPHYXIATED
20 years ago

Teys:done..and very good!!
TB:done...great read
Cookie:bout to do :)
and live well just rate or comment to?

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- Name : ASPHYXIATED
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ASPHYXIATED
20 years ago

cookie:done :)

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- Name : ASPHYXIATED
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ASPHYXIATED
20 years ago

Yeah anyone?

i have read alot of deadly poems!!!

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- Name : ASPHYXIATED
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ASPHYXIATED
20 years ago

yes and yes :)

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- Name : ASPHYXIATED
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ASPHYXIATED
20 years ago

done stacie..and i like the ending :)

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- Name : Garrett
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Garrett
20 years ago

Could you guys read "The Emptiness"? It's my first submission, and I'd appreciate your feedback.

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- Name : ASPHYXIATED
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ASPHYXIATED
20 years ago

no prob stacie and no mine is brokd

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- Name : ASPHYXIATED
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ASPHYXIATED
20 years ago

did munki...get James to tomorrow :)

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- Name : ASPHYXIATED
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ASPHYXIATED
20 years ago

Welcome :)

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- Name : ASPHYXIATED
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ASPHYXIATED
20 years ago

someone give me something to read before I go insane! x_X

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