Constructive Poetry

Hey guys, if you want REAL comments that would HELP your writings and help you improve, post what you want done here, (this is from the topic sick of this) so if you guys could do

Liquid Rose
An Answered Plea
Built Confusion
Realisitc Hell
Why Can't You See?

Pick any one off that, if you want to do more i'll return it!

can you please critique any of my poems with zero comments? I would like to know what people think on poems that have not been reviewed yet.

please feel free to critique on any of my poems also....if you find my style enjoyable,let me know...I am more than happy to take a look at your poems as well.

Thank You.

k i found eight with no comments, so if you could please do eight that have very few ratings or very few comments (including my latest one) or ones with low ratings, thanks!

Whats constructive mean?
Okay I think Im messing, Thanks for your comment travis, as you most likly seen I did you new one..Im gonna go do some old ones so I can make comments :D

x)

i got a new one(you'll know it when you see it, it's at the top and has 0 anything, sad poem) i don't remember the name. lol. anyway, i'll do somemore o yours if you don't mind, ^__^

Feline :D Il do yours!?!

me me me =0)

please comment on:

Sea of depression
do you know
no more
hate me

thank you so much

could you read my featured ones please?

haha constructive ...like helping it out, helpful advice, lol get it? haha thanks for your comments :) any ones you want done?

Yoness :D
Please do "im your conscience" would like more comments on that x)

And thank you :D

haha no thank you! i'll get you both!!

*confused*

God man its late please explain better :D

For my two newest ones, I need some honest feedback on (no "good job, great poem, I liked it, now go read mine and say I'm perfect"). Through Broken Eyes and Sounding Out Heartache are their names, but I only comment back and praise people who give me honest opinions instead of just "Yay" comments.

Any serious poets who need opinions, I'd be happy to be brutally honest for you. : )

♥Niki

if anyone could do some good cunstructive critasism on any poems that appeal to you that would be great it would be better if you did the poems that don't have alot of comments but it doesn't really matter THANKS and i'll comment on your poems for as many comments as you do for mine!

I could use some honest critique. please on these:
Now That Your Gone
If I...

Please and thanks you!
~*hAiLy*~

If you could honestly critique on any of my favourites that would be great! i am always looking for an honest critique because i really want some constructive ideas on improving. Many thanks.

Travis: did you delete 2 of your poems?

Umm I dont think I did.....why?

They might be unfeatured now, i have new ones featured for a while then if they're not my best i take 'em off the featured list

*got three new ones ;)*

but in my favs it was 67 then it went down to 65...il check now :D

Man, now its 68 :D

Il check them out im bout to add a new SHIT one could you check it out?

Done, cjeck it out whenever your on :D

lol thanks, i'll return the fav later tonite cuz i gotta run and make a call! thanks!!

Man, me got another new poem :D

ttyl :D

haha k, since school is today (:() i'll do it when i get back! :D see ya then!!

Awww...school..I got 1 exact week left :D

lol k i'm doin yours now :D

Would you please Do my new on Just another day, Im going to do yours now

okay umm could read My Dear Angel and Book Of Reality:Friends

thanks i would appriciate some real critcism for once!

One of my latest, and prolly favorite poem has gone without getting any comments,.. if you can, it's called Prismatic, and i'd like to see what you think.. i will return the favor for sure.. thanx and pZ out

ok you guys are done! for those lookin to return the favor, please do "liquid rose" thanks!! (psst, lisa, its new!!)

hey can you check out any of mine at all please?

sounds good! for anyone else readin this please do "liquid rose' thanks, thats if you want to return the favor that is...

hey lisa i thought of somethin! wanna vote on some of my quotes? i'll find a way to make i tup! thanks!

i am new and would be thankfull for anything on my poems

sounds good.
thats my dime!
Trav

anyone else?

Yo, sorry Ill check out all your new stuff soon enough, g2g go bye and thank you xx

will u checkout my newest one please? thanks xxx