FREE RATES AND COMMENTS #!)

"Fury" . if you like that and want to read others, i would appreciate it.

Lachrymae Rerum, if you will. Or for that matter, whatever catches your attention. I will try to return the favour as soon as possible.

please read my 7 newest poems....thx....i'll read some of yours

any of mine that appeal to you are fine, and/or my featured ones, thanks so much!!!

i'll return the favor for the same amount each :)

Same here with me! I posted to the #9 and you didn't answer.

i posted here and in #9 and i didnt get feedback from either.....wiat..james you read alot of mine....but i dunno im confused

Live without my best friend... its my newest poem about one of my friends.. i'd like to know what you think.. thanks bye bye EJ

Please and thank you!!

sadness behind everything thx much

Endless Love
Better Life With The Lord
Let Me Be
Living This Life
*Thanks so much!
and God Bless.

you
you were my world
in my heart

cheers!!

you always skip over me too:(( not fair. please commebt on some of mine and i will return the favor

My two latest...thanks

Please on my newest called I Do

Please and thank you!

I just need some serious cirtiques. I feel a void in my poems and still don't know what I'm missing. I would appreciate it. Thanks. =)

Like "Undying Blusher" Her comments are helping me plentiful. Don't hesitate.

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Please comment on:

Still loves him
suicidal girl

thank you so so much

Please comment on:
Dancing With Demons// Or // Suicides Lover (Part IV) (Foolish)
I WILL return the favour !!!!

xxx cici xxx

ok, guys I think you've read some of my previous work. Though I haven't had anyone read,vte or comment on my new material I would like it if you guys would read my work!!! Thanx

Can you read 'A widows comfort' please?
Grazie mille

Sarahx

can someone check out my older poem "hands"? greatly apprieciated, and the favor will be returned!
Chao!

plzz r/r/c on ne of my featured ones! thx ill return the favor!!!!!!!

If Love's So Great...
Five Seconds
Little Secrets

if you could read those three, thatd be awesome. thnx a lot. i'll return the favor

U can read mine! My new ones are in need of some lovin' ;)
~BJ~

Please comment on all of my featured poems and if you cant comment on all of them then please just comment on my poem called Untitled

thanx a bunch

please r/r/c any of my poems i need some serious feed back cuz im thinking about quitting posting my poems.. thank you so much

James, thanks for the honesty. I think I have made it clear to some people, I have trouble with those irritating "ed" "are" "is" "s" and so on. Maybe you can PM me the lesson? It's the past tense, plurals, and singualrs.

It would be most appreciated. =)

Edited: Nevermind, JPM is helping me.

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My featured poems and my new one lonely Rain

angel of death
finnally released

thank you

Thanks very much...I need any of them...I really need help...Thanks

Dear thread #10, I would be very happy if you could take the time to read Nighttime Seagull.
You see, I'm not sure if ppl are being honest when they've said they like it, and I would appreciate really knowing.
Thanks so much.
beth.

Love In Your Eyes

thanks alot i'll try to return the favor too.oh please rate and comment plz.thanks

A widows comfort
passed away

Thank you

if you were to read rate and comment on any of mine that would be great but in particular would love to know what ya think about Deadly Slumber and Untitled angels and animals

please read my 2 newest poems...thats all!! thx!! just get to it w/e you can

If you wouldnt mind commenting on any of my poems (minus that special plason) i would be very greatful thanks you

~A Hopeful Heart~

Please read any of my poems and ill return the favor.
Thanks...

ha yeah i probally should have read that above me lol oops