free comments anyone?? no strings attached

thats right!! give me any poems (5 max at a time, though i might read more) and i'll comment and vote.

i try to give advice and feedback in my comments.

so reply with any poems you want me to read, and i'll get to it as quickly as possible. thanks guys

Ruby

hi just read any of my new ones plz...thnx in advance...i appreciate it very much.
~*Who Cares?*~

"Why Don't You Have A Heart?"
"Confused Heart"
"Free at Last"
"The Fourth Month Of My Life..."

Please and thanksya muches in advance :D

~BJ~

all done
wonderful stuff guys. its easy to comment with poems this good

commenting on any of mine would be appreciated
thanx. =)

hey.. plz try
"Sometimes"
"Stand A Chance"
"Part Of"
"Letting Go"

and u chose the last if ur up to it

thnx bunches
Nannoush

Stay strong
My life
The game of slice and dice
Stolan identity and
I tell myself lies..

Thanks and I will check out some of yours.. :D

Sorry sarah babes, My maternal feelings, You hurt me, The courage inside, Me now and If I Go. Thanks :)

if you could read any of my poems that would be nice.. i need feedback:)

I'd much appreciate it if you could please read the following pieces:

"Xiomara"
"Edge Of Sanity"
"The Original Doll"
"Suicide Moon"
"City Lights"

Thanks in advance

ok everyone. i'll be as fast as i can!

ok umm
innocence
knight in shining amror

thax.
emma

guys, a small favor, i need a title for my new poem. its called untitled at the moment... yeah i need a name, so if your not too busy, any ideas would be great.

keep on giving me poems. i love all the ones i have read so far

why is our friendship over
you destroyed my life
Goodbye my friend
goodbye my dear child

Thanks so much! ill vote and comment on yours

hello please just pick a title that interests you,worries that devour me is probably my best recent one though.your such an angel.=)

mine is called "Fading away..." and its my only one thankies:D

"Universal Spell"

"Blue Ink"

"Emotional Pain"

"Lonely Mind"

"Ecstatic Tears"

Thanks ahead of time M'Dear. =)

( )_( )
(='.'=)
(")-(") Arrivederci!

just taking a small break. i'll be back to work in a jiffy. i'll get back to the poems tomorrow.

Thank u for ur comment Ruby:) and if u want I just posted a new one I wrote tonight..:) again thank u:D

just one. "Anything But Ignore Me". if you do this...i'll love you forever! thanks

I would be thankful if you commented on my "Lachrymae Rerum", "The Immensity of Emptiness", "The Elegy of the Lovers" and "A Melodious Failure." Thanks in advance.

Could you pretty please check out my poems...any will do...
Xox sherrie

The Greatest Moment Ever, Just Kill Me Now, One More Time, and any others you want to read. Thanks abunch

Please comment on:

Hurting inside
Tell me
To my dear brother
Pray for sister please
Still loves him

Thank you so much in advance

the latest 5 would help....i'm having a lot of problems in my relationship and i could use ur feedback...
thankz sooo much

wow am i popular! it may take me a while to get through, but ill do my best!! :)

Dying Butterflies
Here's My Heart
Burning My Desires
Before Our Goodbye
While I was Gone

Thank you in advance.
You don't know how much this means ♥

any of my featured poems! thnx

hey.. i erally need help on this poem.. nothing else..
i want to know what you think before i send it off to that special someone :D

please comment on *never wanting to let you go*

"A Tribute to the Nice Guys"

Thank you =)

please read:

-*-confusion?-*-
-*-land of death-*-
-*-searching in the abyss-*-
-*-today-*-
-*-my perfect lover-*-

.~*much love, erica*~.

~Lies~
~Talking To Her~
~Uncaring~
~Thinking~
~Because Of Him~
Thanks

--Sarah--

ok just my 2 featured poems plz.

Could you just look at my profile and check some of my poems? thanks.

wow 39 replys (thats incouding mine) i may take some time with this, so dont be disapointed if it takes a while before my comments apear.

i will do my best!!! thanks for all the peoms i have read so far. you guys are all brillient

regards

Ruby

Please could you comment on
'You're everywhere to me'
'You thought'
'Trying to forget you'
'Why would you care?'
'What he thought he knew'
Thank you so much in advance

I don't care...Any of them. Thanx! :D

-♥-Anarchy-♥-

I ♥ Cereal

If you could:

Trying to forget
Lets just be friends
Why couldn't you see
Their suicide

Thanks

if you've got time could you have a look at any of mine. thanx, vik

hey could you please check out my newest ones, and any others plz? thanx a bunch!