Honest Critiques, 2

How about... "Free at last" (it's about ... so if you don't wanna read it, then I suggest "The Fourth Month of my life")

thanksya muches in advance!

~BJ~

thanks so much for opportunity, i want u to read my "Fighting Destiny" that i musta posted like...3 mins ago. APPRECIATE IT!

thankx so much, crazy water bottle, ill get to one of ur poems right now

i would appreciate if you read either my latest poem. or one of my featured poems... or any other one for that matter, pick whichever apeals to you lol. thanx

can you please comment on "falling" my new poem. I havent gotton one in deapth comment. Thanx so much!!!

if you would not mind reading a three parter than How About You would be awesome, if not =) then any one that appeals to you, they are all about my gf (minus the one sad poem lol) thanks!

"The Heart of The Eyes"

Thanks Jess. =)

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(")-(") Arrivederci!

"Moment of Explosion"

Thanks!

Christa

Could you read my poem "Have you?" Thanks

Yours Sincerely

Andrew Kirkman

I gots a new one called *For those who think they know love...* so please check it out thankys:) Rate low please tell me why, rate high again please tell me why lol.

It's called ~In My World~ I would love any advice you could give me on it. Thanks.

Hi, CrazyWaterBottle! Need another help from you.

'Death'

Thanks alot! =)

My newest poem, could you give me some advice on it? its called "killing butterflies"

Alrightie I got a new one called *Go deeper...* pretty please check it out!

Hey, check out Ruby Red Jewel; A Histery, please, thanks! *kisses*