Do you need honest comments? (2)

Hey guys, I had one of these already but something funny happend with my computer and its not showing up so I aplogize to those who gave me poems to read but I didnt get to them... However, I would still like to continue reading and commenting on your poems so please leave me some of your titles here... I will definetly check out at least one of them and if I have time I will do up to five so leave me a few or just tell me to choose some... Although I do not ask you to return the favor it is always greatly apperciated... thank you to all who have already commented on my poems... so with that said please leave me some poetry to read here I will review them honestly and tell you excatly what I think... thanks guys!

sammie

my newset one
Lost love
and then
Cant you see.

Thanks
Emma

um my 2 newest ones,
"you"
"soldier"

thanks so much!
jesx

Hey would you check the ultimate state of mind and the paradox plz! :D

Please read my newest called I'm Sorry.
Thanks a lot.

if you could read my poem called "Fortunate" that'd be great
happy new year to all of you

Please read my poem cast thy shadow and leave an honest comment, I will read yours as soon as I get the chance... thank you
:)

Can you please read
-Making everything right
-Lets Play
And Alone in my room
And I will return the favor!!!!
Thankyou

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What would you say (to my everything)

thanks...

Any and as much.

Love ya thanks :)

sorry its takeing me a while to read these but i'll have them finished in less than an hour... until then leave me some new ones guys!

HAPPY NEW YEAR!

sammie

sorry guys... im not going to get to these all tonight... im babysitting 8 little kids and they are getting to be a handful... but i promise i'll finish tomorrow... any new ones will be finished tomorrow too... sorry bout that...

sammie

murder or suicide
love is where you are
only wish

any that you find interesting please or any that don't have comments you decide

pills from satan..thanks!

secret illness = thanks

Anything you want, I just want some really harsh criticism in hopes my writing will get better... Thankyou so much, you're very sweet to offer this :)

hey if u can, rate Mommy, I'm His Baby... thank you

you seem to have a lot of requests already, but if time
underneath my shield
i will, of course, return the favour
Polly xx

Hey guys... sorry it took me so long to get those finished... i've been so busy lately.. but things have quited down a bit and i'm ready to read more of your poetry... so leave me some new ones!

sammie

anyone else need honset comments?

sammie

"tears in the paint"

thanks in advance, which poem do u want me to return the favour on?

stef/xx

I don't have to many poems on here... But if you could comment or rate one of the 4 i do have i'd really appreciate it...

any of mine i am tryin to get back on here again and have a few new poems and would like help with them
Kit

I would be thankful if you could comment on any of my newest poems. Cheers. I will try to return the favour, but I cannot promise anything until next week. Sorry about that.

nice work everyone! i have finished with all of those and if there is anyone else who has poems they would like me to take a look at feel free to post them.. i'll be here for awhile..

sammie

i already posted here a day ago i think but do u think u cud read one more of mine? contemplation, the first time, or... well either of those, i will read a few of urs if u like

anymore?

sammie

oh please read mine
"A deeper yearning(Hitokiri Battusai)
thanxxxxxxxx

read any of mine... thanks

anymore?

sammie

Hey, I really don't need the comments, but I love to get the truth...so if you have the time, if you could read my newest three, Addressed To You The Rich Man, Savior, and Drowning Part V, that would be great.

Please, I'm just asking for an honest comment/ vote.

Smile.

I'll return the favor too.

anymore?

sammie

"RIP Josh, Ian, Matt"

...thanks

Hi Sammie!!
Need Critique... :)

"The End" -- my first 'dark' styled poem..
Cheers!
xoxo
Laterz,
Shirlz.