Do you want me to read your poems?

  • Once an Angel
    19 years ago

    Hey all! I am an editor of our school literary magazine and even thought I can't spell, I am pretty good at reading poems and give constructive cristism and praise as well. If I ever tell you to fix something, I will always point out the good qualities of you poems along with it! So if you want me to read your poem give me a post and I will be happy to. If you want me to look at specific things while reading you can tell me those too! Can't wait to read your writing!

    -Tainted Mikochan

  • Once an Angel
    19 years ago

    MY1&only: Hey, I read your poems, and commented on the ones that I could. For some reason my account is being stupid and isn't letting me comment on poems in the Love catogory or the Friendship catogory. I wrote the administrators about it, and hopefully the problems will be resolved soon, but either way good poems hun!

    -Tainted Mikochan

  • Once an Angel
    19 years ago

    Kristen, I will be sure to read your poem! And I tried your advice about the poem and the backspace thing, but it didn't work. *sigh*

    -Tainted Mikochan

  • Katie
    19 years ago

    id love some criticism n suggestions (poems and titles...) ~thanks

  • F@n©y Ket©hup
    19 years ago

    "Wishing Away My Life"

    Thanks ahead of time M'Dear.

    ~Atomic

  • Michelle
    19 years ago

    Please read my poem:

    "Please Hold Me Tight,"

    And, I promise to return the favor!!! Thanks!

  • MaSkEdSoUl
    19 years ago

    hey I'd appreciate it if you read 3 of my poems of your choice if you dont want to choose then tell me and I'll choose for you. Please and Thank you!!

  • Alex Marlatt
    19 years ago

    "Never again to love"

    "Drowning"

    -and-

    "Subservient"

    much obligied man

  • Timeless Hopeful
    19 years ago

    Any of my new poems...

  • Once an Angel
    19 years ago

    Hey guys! Wow thanks for all the poems to read, I will get right on them. Just a memo, my account is having issues with reading love poems and friendship poems so it might be a bit before I get to them, sorry about that!

    -Tainted Mikochan

  • NannO
    19 years ago

    heya..
    i wud reli appreciate it if u read
    "In Candlelight Glow" (it was 4 a poetry contest 4 our school paper)

    "And I Look At Myself"

    "Nothing Broken"

    "Sometimes"

    thnx bunches

    NannO

  • libby
    19 years ago

    I would love it if you could look at some of my recent works. Thanks in advance!

  • Syn
    19 years ago

    ~ Broken Hearts ~
    ~I Guess This Is Good-Bye~
    ~Sinking Ship ~
    ~ Death's Kiss ~

    Thank you,
    ~ David

  • holly
    19 years ago

    yeah could you please read,
    "SOS"
    "BEN"
    "Feeling Green in the Game of Love"
    and "ALL i NEED"

    thanks, xxALLYxx

  • Atomic
    19 years ago

    "His Friendship Game"

    Thanks ahead of time M'Dear.

    ( )_( )
    (='.'=)
    (")-(") Arrivederci!

  • amelia
    19 years ago

    murder or suicide..... this poem is close to my heart...
    if u can read rate & comment i'd be more than happy

  • Michael D Nalley
    19 years ago

    PLEASE R/R/C Justice

  • Tara Kay
    19 years ago

    hey,
    I would be greatful of some honest comments on these following poems

    Runaway,
    I've found the place where I belong,
    Murder in a warehouse,
    No one's ever been crueller than I've been to me

    thankyou in advance

    Love Tara xxxx

  • Once an Angel
    19 years ago

    Well I have read everyone that has asked me to, and I hope my input was helpful. If anyone else wants to add their poems to be read you are welcome to do so.

    -Tainted Mikochan

  • Emma
    19 years ago

    kiling me
    First love
    and Afraid

    That would be great.
    Emma

  • Once an Angel
    19 years ago

    Atomic: Hey dear, I wasn't able to comment on your poem directly because of technilogical difficulties, but it was really a great one. I did vote a 5/5. You poem had a message that was all too farmiliar to me. It really sucks when you trust someone and it turns out you have been played, that is just wrong, you know? I can definately see where you were coming from with that poem and it was really great! Best wishes to you hun!

    -Tainted Mikochan

  • Idiosyncratic
    19 years ago

    Hi, could you read/comment on
    Prelude to Extinction
    Happens
    and Anonymous Insomniac?
    That'd be great, thanks!
    -Erica

  • Allison
    19 years ago

    Please r/r/c " The Vampire's Kiss".

  • LadyPearl
    19 years ago

    Hey, thank you for commenting on "Fields of Innocence"

    Can you check out
    -Gates of Reality
    -Untouched love

  • J Lau
    19 years ago

    Any rating / comments are appreciated on all my work... Thanks!
    J. Lau