Offering honest comments

  • Bluey!
    19 years ago

    Hey there
    Bet you're here to get some more comments to your poems aint you?
    Yupp figured as much
    Anyhow, i'll read, vote, and comment on your poems
    Not the "It was good" kind of commenting but more of my honest opinion of your work (Not that my opinion matters)

    So should you want a few poems commented on i'll be happy to read them.

    Preferably not more than two poems per person but, we'll see.

    I do not ask you to comment on my poems, but feel free to do so if you want to, not neccesairy though

    /Bluey the nothing

  • Tara Kay
    19 years ago

    please do my newest 2

  • Bluey!
    19 years ago

    Commented on your newest two, thanks for sharing.

  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Could you please do my latest one? It's called Emotional Landslide. =) Thanks if you do.

  • Bluey!
    19 years ago

    Just did, i'm fast at doing it right now since i'm sitting here bored, though your poem was short, explosive and very nice, thank you for sharing.

    Anyone else?

  • Tara Kay
    19 years ago

    im back again, i was hoping you could do the following too
    "Sitting on top of the world"
    "The person I am"
    "I wont be hurt by silly words"
    "Murder in a warehouse"

    Thank you, in advance
    and I'll do a couple of yours

    xxxxxxxxx

  • Goran Rahim
    19 years ago

    can u do my
    DID I LIE and WE WERE BEST FRIENDS
    thank you very much for your honest comment

  • Michael D Nalley
    19 years ago

    please comment on my new poem 'Recognition'

  • NannO
    19 years ago

    hey Bluey..
    i wud reli appreciate it if u r/r/c "Nothing Compares" and "Dedicated".. they are my latest..

    ill make sure i return the favor..

    thnx bunches in advance
    take care
    NannO

  • Bluey!
    19 years ago

    Tara-kay, I commented on all you asked for, thank you for sharing, I enjoy your poetry.

  • Bluey!
    19 years ago

    Working on the other people wanting my comments now :)

  • Bluey!
    19 years ago

    Goran, Michael and NannO done!

    Well written all of you three, sweet work.

    Moving on to the next one.

    More people wanting comments?
    I'm actuallys starting to like commenting, so keep em comming!

  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Tehe, if you don't mind.. could you please do "Unhealed Wounds" ..You don't have to if you don't want to though. =)

  • Bluey!
    19 years ago

    Brianna, did three of yours, such cute songs, really liked them and I hope I get to hear them on the radio sometime!

  • Bluey!
    19 years ago

    TaLeEe I commented on the one you said, was touching, thanks for sharing, let me know if you want one more commented on.

    I'll be here for a while longer so people dont be afraid to shower me in comment requests, just preferably not more than two-four from a single person since I seem to get some people wanting me to read alot :)

    I dont mind though, keep the poems comming!

  • Bluey!
    19 years ago

    Seems like thats all i'm getting for today then

    and i'm noticing that i'm posting like insane on my own thread... a sign of insanity?

    Nah i'm just bored, i'll give this thread about 15-20 more minutes then i'm off to do some adventures such as doing the laundry or find out how much Soda a human body can handle before exploding.

  • LockedInEternity
    19 years ago

    if you dont mind could you just pick any 1 or 2 poem(s) to comment..i would really appreciate it..and ill go check out your poems :D

  • Bluey!
    19 years ago

    Yaaay! Someone needs me! The soda adventure will be put on hold then!

    And MaLuV4uIsEnDlEsS you really dont have to comment on my poems unless you want to, this is not a "trade" post :)

    Wouldnt hate you for commenting though, promise
    I'll just chase you with an axe ;)

  • Bluey!
    19 years ago

    Woohoo MaLuV4uIsEnDlEsS your poems were great!

    I'd reccomend others to read your poems too.

    Lets see now.. the thread seems calm and nice, perhaps I should go downstairs and check how long it takes to run a bath twelve times, or put on a dog suit and chase the cat... hmm.. tempting... Unless someone wants comments!

  • Bluey!
    19 years ago

    Oh no... silence... bothering.. me... must... do.. something!

    I'm heading out soon so make sure you use and abuse my will to comment before I go!

    Once again, there is no obligation to comment back on my poems, though appreciated.

    And that cat is lucky that its outside... had to tuck away my dog suit, dont ask me why I have one.

  • Bluey!
    19 years ago

    Time for me to head out since i'm bored, you all take care and thank you for letting me read your poems was enjoyable, hope you all keep writing!

    Hugs 'N some love

    /Bluey the wierd?

  • David Marshall
    19 years ago

    hey bluey.this is cool of u to do so....ummm i would like it if u could comment my poems
    ''free'' and ''crying wine''

    free is one of my older ones but i like it....crying wine is my newest one....thank you
    ~David~

  • Little Dot
    19 years ago

    Could you please comment, Killing Words and Remi's Poem. I'll return the favour. Thanks :-D

  • Heather
    19 years ago

    Can you comment on my poems, Only If, and Homesick Lover
    Thanks

  • BlueEyedMystery
    19 years ago

    Can you please do my latest two?
    Thanksss =]

  • J Lau
    19 years ago

    Please comment on "Life is Beautiful - and so they say... " and "Fate. ... that was never meant to be... "

    Please and thank you.

    J. Lau