FREE COMMENTS !!

Hey, I`m giving away free comments again! Two per person, per day. =D If you`d like some free comments, leave one or two titles you`d like r/r/c`d in this post. I`ll get to them asap, first come first serve. I`ll be keeping you updated in this post whose I`ve done, along with a breif summary of what I thought. Thanks!

LET`S GET COMMENTiNG!!

Samantha Hollywood

Nobody wants free comments? That`s weird.

lol I would be nope no new poems

Hi would love it if you read some of my stuff. Constructive critism always helpful. I will read and rate urs also.

Brianna --
Done. =D You did a wonderful job on that!! I really liked the repitition of certain words, and the flow was excellent. Wonderful Job.

Loretta --
I`ve done two of your poems ;; and they were pretty good. 'My Personal Hell' definitely has room for improvement ;; but the other one (forgot the title = /) was really good. Nice job, keep it up. No need to r/r/c any of mine.

Kaylee --
I couldn`t tell whether or not you were interested, so I found one of yours that I haven`t done, and did it. =D You did a wonderful job, I love reading nature poems! Great job, keep it up.

Gotta take a break, be back soon! Keep posting!

So I have two I'd love you to comment on...
But the thing is, they're both uber long...

So if you'll comment on them, I'll give you two in return...So it's worth your time.

xDarkSuicidex

"You Don't Know Me"
&
"The Dreamer"

can you please comment
" A pirates life for me"

and also

whichever one else you wanna comment :)

I'll return the favour.

SAMMMMMY!

Could you do:

Goodbye

and

Overdramatic

Merci...i love you!

Hey!! Sorry for the delay, I`m getting on this right now! If anyone else would like comments ;; please keep posting!

Museum --
I just did one of your featured poems ;; wonderful job! The flow could have been better, but the rest was perfect. Wonderful job, keep it up!

Cry Baby --
Hey! Sorry again about the name thing, lol. I think you did a wonderful job, keep it up! 5/5 for sure. =D

xDarkSuicidex --
Hey! I already did one of the poems you listed ;; so please, post another one in here. I think you need to start combining your sentences so they don`t seem so choppy, but you did a good job. Nice write, keep it up.

Socks --
Hey! You did a really good job on the 'pirates' one. The grammar in the other one wasn`t as hott, which was basically why I had to dock you. Overall, not bad!

I have a new one called "A Lesson In Backstabbing"

Please read :D

could you r/c my poems "Like A Night Star" and "Frail Love"?
thanks

Steph --
You did a great job on both your poems! You`re a wonderful writer ;; keep it up! Love you too, babe! 5/5

Darien --
You did a really good job on this poem, as usual. I love your sense of vocabulary, adds such a nice twist. Wonderful job, keep it up!

Kristen --
Lol, really? I say 'vase' wrong, then. Oh well, thats how everyone says it here in Chicago. If I said it the other way, they`d probably think I was speaking another language. Lol! Sorry again about the name, and thanks for telling me. It`s engraved in my mind. =D

Driver --
You. Are. Wonderful.

^^ All I`ve got to say.

Um do...I Am

xDarkSuicidex

Hey hun, please comment on:

I will be okay
Ana

Thank you so much =0)

xDarkSuicidex --
You did a wonderful job on 'I am'. I think it held a lot of emotion, one of your best writes yet. Keep it up!

Sabrina --
Great job! I feel that you forced your rhyming a bit ;; but its all good. You did a really good job, keep it up!

my latest pleasee? thank youu!

Could you please do "One, Two, Three, Four" and any other you would like thank you so much.

Any 2 that you haven't already read, because I think you've commented on a few already!
Thanks

Can you do
"Our Life"
&&
"Silent Muder"
Please and THANKYOU!!:)

CAn you do "is this my first love?"
please AND TAHNK YOU VERY MUCH!

If theres any new ones of mine that you havn't done, could you please do one? You don't have to if you don't wanna though. =P

Sorry for the delay, again, guys. Getting right on it.

Jessy --
You did a wonderful job on your newest poem! Everything was perfect, keep it up!! 5/5

Candice --
Not bad! Though I feel that you definitely have room for improvement, you didn`t do badly. Nice job, keep it up.

Sarah White --
You did a wonderful job on both of your poems! Definitely keep this up.

MaLuV4uIsEnDlEsS --
'Silent Murder' Wasn`t as good as I expected it ;; the flow was just really off. But I still gave it a 5/5 for other reasons. 'Our Life' was REALLY good! Keep it up!

Torment --
I`ve already done that poem, I remember the title. If you`d like a different one done, please post in here.

Samantha-

If you're up for it, could you do:
I Am
A Knight's Tale

If you've done them, don't worry about it unless you want to find a random poem.. But I'd those done, please. ^.^ Thanks!

xDarkSuicidex

(Favor always returned)

"It's Okay To Cry (Song)"

Please and thanksya muches in advance :)

~BJ~

Talee --
Though it may have taken a while to find two of your newer poems that I haven`t done, I`m glad I found some! You did a terrific job on both, as usual. Why WOULDN`T I want to comment on your work? Love it!

Shiky --
Not bad! I think the flow definitely needs some work, but otherwise ;; wonderful job! Keep it up!

xDarkSuicidex --
You did an awesome job on your ottava rima! Keep this up, definitely!

Kristen --
You did a terrific job!! Keep it up, I love your work! And, thanks for changing your name. =P. LOL!

BJ --
You did a wonderful job writing that song! Keep it up!

Thankyou for the honesty in your comments and if you'd like me to do some of yours just post:):)

u have read some of mine before but could u please read sum others cos ur comments wer very helpful :)

-biscuit-

It would be nice if you could comment on Misery's Door.

//T.L.//

Hallo! If you are not too busy, could you please check out "éternité amère-doucer"? The title is in french,yes, but the poem is in english. It is my first proper love poem (I usually do dark) and I am experimenting with new genres, so I would really appreciate some honest critique.
Many thanks, and I would be glad to return the favour.
^-^
Peace, love and empathy
- Vladimira Rose

It would be nice if you read Stop the wars and any other of your choice. Thankyou

Made in tears and Thoughts... thx... i only have two poems :p thx alot! ü

if you havn't done any of my latest could you have a look please? sorry for keep asking but i love your comments.. :P

somone comment my poems.. ill return it