Get your honest feedback here!

I'll offer honest and constructive feedback on any poem (will not rate unless requested).
All you have to do is leave the title below.

Just a reminder, I will be honest (not only offer praise) but I won't be completely harsh; I'm not that mean. I will offer suggestions (if I have any) and state what I think can be improved, as well as what is good about the poem.

One title at a time please. (when I've done that one, you may request another) I just don't want to get overloaded with lots of requests at once.

It's not a requirement but I wouldn't argue if you could do the same for me (honest and constructive feedback).

Thanks...

Wall Flower

Thank you in advance

There you go, RoadandtheRadio.

Thank you. Can you please read Speak as well :)

Can you please rrc "Tell Her"
Thankyou:)

The ending of the day,
Thank you
Letty

Hey! Can you r/r/c my Trapped in Time? Since you're such a nice person... and nobody above has offered to do one of yours... I will do one of your poems.
Thanks Babe.
:)

I'm commented or r/r/c on all of the poems requested.

Shadowspoet, you didn't leave a title. Please do, then I know which to critique.

Anyone else?

Family Tree

please :)

There you go Biscuit.

Anyone else?

lol Thanks for you comment silver. I put an explanation on the bottonm: The salt is tears (I thought tears would be an over used word) and the rest of that sentence if about eating a cake covered in tears to symbolize something terrible that had happened on a birthday, the dam is how much tears and the whole poem is about wantng to speak pain but not being able to. Spanish Carbon is the person who caused the pain: A spanish boy who acted as if he were poison.

Please comment on:

Bleeding Heart

Thank you =0)

thanks very much SJ