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Name : dollwithafrown
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*CLOSED*

Hey.

Please comment on any one of my poems, and I'll comment on three of yours.

Please say which ones you want me to do, and tell me which one of mine you commented on.

- Name : Michael D Nalley
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Michael D Nalley
19 years ago

I enjoyed reading you poem 'I pleadge"
would you please r/r/c

What is It?
Charity
Faith

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- Name : dollwithafrown
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dollwithafrown
19 years ago

Done. =]

Thanks for your comment.

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- Name : dollwithafrown
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dollwithafrown
19 years ago

Done. :)

Thank you for your comment.

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- Name : Italian Stallion
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Italian Stallion
19 years ago

Done, could you please do...

The Photo of You
Who would've known (Rap)
I wish I would've known

Thank you, Joe

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- Name : dollwithafrown
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dollwithafrown
19 years ago

Haha, I just commented on two of your poems already.

I will, however, do those three as well.

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- Name : Italian Stallion
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Italian Stallion
19 years ago

Thank you, I will do 2 more for you as well in return :)

Ciao, Joe

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- Name : dollwithafrown
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dollwithafrown
19 years ago

Thanks. =]

That's those three done now.

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- Name : xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
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xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
19 years ago

Nicely done...Please do:

Cannabalism {Double Ottava Rima}
Purple Lips Upon A Wedding Corpse
The 'One Man' Show {Terzanelle}

Thank you...Enjoy. ^.^

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

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- Name : LockedInEternity
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LockedInEternity
19 years ago

ok, i did "I Pledge.."
i thought it was a really good poem..can you please do:
"Hidden world"
"Who am I?"
&&
"Her GAme of Life"
Thankyou:)

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- Name : Carmen
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Carmen
19 years ago

i have read yours. please read these three:

This Star
Please Tell Me
Angry Temptations

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- Name : dollwithafrown
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dollwithafrown
19 years ago

^ Done all of them. =]

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- Name : VYXSIN
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VYXSIN
19 years ago

i done mascara bleeds, do watever of mine that you want

sara

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- Name : dollwithafrown
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dollwithafrown
19 years ago

Thanks.

I've done:

"Something she forgot to mention"
"It was murder"
and
"Pretty........ugly"

=]

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- Name : dollwithafrown
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dollwithafrown
19 years ago

Anymore?

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Name : emmerz
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emmerz
19 years ago

hey i commented on 'i pledge' and thought it was really good!

if you could comment on my three that would be great!
1. the story behind her smile
2. memories
3. the one who caught my heart

some of them are a bit older, but whatever! lol
Emmm

- Name : LadyPearl
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LadyPearl
19 years ago

Bullet In my Heart
Dark Dwellers
Marry me, Your Dead bride

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- Name : dollwithafrown
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dollwithafrown
19 years ago

Done.

By the way, DarkPrincess, I had already commented "Marry me, Your Dead Bride", so if you want me to do something else just let me know.

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- Name : dollwithafrown
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dollwithafrown
19 years ago

Any others?

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- Name : ~*Ã—FaÃ3Dâ€¡â€¡Mâ‚¬mÃ˜Â®ÃÃªÂ§Ã—*~
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~*Ã—FaÃ3Dâ€¡â€¡Mâ‚¬mÃ˜Â®ÃÃªÂ§Ã—*~
19 years ago

i did "i pledge"
could u plz do these 3 of mine:
1 hurt me
2 i gotta be strong
3 empty

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- Name : Hopeless Romantic
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Hopeless Romantic
19 years ago

Life with an Angel.
Jealousy.
Light of my Life.

I read i pledge.

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- Name : dollwithafrown
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dollwithafrown
19 years ago

Done. =]

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- Name : Kalgalath
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Kalgalath
19 years ago

An Angels Rose (revised)
As I Walked Across This Bridge Of Dreams (revised)

i read bizarre new land

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Name : dollwithafrown
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dollwithafrown
19 years ago

Done. :)

Thanks for commenting.

Just a little note: could you guys please comment on older poems, instead of the most recent one, because some of my older poems don't have very many (or any!) votes.

- Name : Jessica
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Jessica
19 years ago

There you go hun =]

I did "Dear Diary" can you please do:

`Beneath The Surface
`Revealing Bliss [Malisus]
`Glistening Skin [Parquette]

Thankss, xx.

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Name : dollwithafrown
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dollwithafrown
19 years ago

Done. :)

Thank you for commenting on my poem. I just have to say, your writing is amazing. I'm really glad you asked me to comment one of yours. I've added you to my favourites, so I'm sure I'll go back and comment more of yours soon. XD

- Name : ShootingStar179
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ShootingStar179
19 years ago

I read "The Day the World Died".

Will you pleeeeeease read and comment/rate...?

Does Love stop here?
The Battle is Won
Law of Karma

Thanks!

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- Name : dollwithafrown
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dollwithafrown
19 years ago

I've done Debbie's.

I'll reply to the other poems later on, because I have to go just now.

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- Name : dollwithafrown
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dollwithafrown
19 years ago

That's them all done now. XD

On a side note, I now have a new poem up: "Remembering A Soldier". I'd love if you guys could comment on that.

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- Name : katie!
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katie!
19 years ago

I'll comment remembering a soldier

Could you comment. "To be a Touretter" and "The epic journey"

Thank you kindly.
XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXx

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- Name : dollwithafrown
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dollwithafrown
19 years ago

Done. =]

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- Name : dollwithafrown
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dollwithafrown
19 years ago

Come on people, I want more poems to read. :D

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- Name : Jessica
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Jessica
19 years ago

Thankss for adding me sweetie! =] I really appreciate it, xx.

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- Name : dollwithafrown
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dollwithafrown
19 years ago

No problem. =]

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- Name : dollwithafrown
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dollwithafrown
19 years ago

Anybody else?

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Name : Stephanie
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Stephanie
19 years ago

Wow. I r/r/c your poem Mascara Bleeds and I must say that it was VERY good! :) Liked it a lot. You're very talented with poetry.

Um...Could you do:

Used To Be A Strong Girl
Bittersweet Reunion
"I'm Leaving"

Thx! :)

- Name : SCARECROW
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SCARECROW
19 years ago

Just "Saturated â€“ a tale of lyrical melancholy" please, and I'll gladly read yours. In fact, I'll go do so now....

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- Name : dollwithafrown
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dollwithafrown
19 years ago

Both done now. XD

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- Name : dollwithafrown
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dollwithafrown
19 years ago

Anyone else? I really wanna keep this thread alive, lol.

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- Name : dollwithafrown
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dollwithafrown
19 years ago

Nobody wanting comments anymore?

Please? Lol.

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