Who wants some HONEST critiques

  • katie!
    19 years ago

    Hi,

    I'd love to take a look at some of your work on here and give you some HONEST feedback.

    It will be constructive.

    I'd appreciate it if you checked out "To be a Touretter" on my poems, but it's not compulsory

    1 poem at a time please.

    Love katie!
    X

  • emmerz
    19 years ago

    hi could you please look at 'the story behind her smile'? thnaks alot

    and i will read that poem sometime today when i get the chance, so no worries!

    EMMM!!

  • ShootingStar179
    19 years ago

    Will you do "How long can I abstain?"

    Thanks!

  • katie!
    19 years ago

    Done all those, anyone else?

  • Anonymous
    19 years ago

    Icecream Love?

  • Meet Me On Thames Street
    19 years ago

    could you do "Is It True?" for me
    I'll read your poem when I get a chance.

  • Poetess Lana
    19 years ago

    could you please read nothing on me? and ill definitely read your poem, i love reading other peoples poetry!

  • Normal is the Watchword
    19 years ago

    any of mine will do. : ) It's not a lot and I'd rather you pick what might be interesting.

  • Misstress
    19 years ago

    Please check out

    -Union of Souls-

    thanks.

  • Allison
    19 years ago

    You can read any that you like. I would like critiques on any of my poems. :)

  • Goran Rahim
    19 years ago

    the bower of love

  • BleedingAngel
    19 years ago

    Please comment on:

    My secret alter

    Thank you

  • AnnMarie
    19 years ago

    Please r/r/c "the mirror"

    thanks

  • Jessica
    19 years ago

    Meeee? Could you do my latest one please? Thankss sweetie! =]

  • Jenni Marie
    19 years ago

    Could you please do

    *The Inner Monster OR i Can't Take This Anymore it is Yours To Choose.

    Thank You.
    xx

  • katie!
    19 years ago

    Right, I'll get started on these now.

  • katie!
    19 years ago

    All of those are commented!

    Hope it was helpful!

    Keep em coming...

    XXXX

  • Anonymous
    19 years ago

    Thank you, I really appriciated your comment, katie! :]