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Hey everyone,
Ive got a new poem called,
- Right Then Right There

I'd love some feedback, I want HONEST comments, and if you dont like it please tell me why.
Tips for improvement are allways welcome!
No one liners please.
If you want any pacific poems doing then please leave titles.
Thank you.
xx

I r/r/c your poem it was really nicely done, could you please r/r/c my 2 poems called Hand in Hand and Temptations Angry Flame. thanks Karl Wild

Done both.
They were excellent, especially enjoyed the secound poem. It was great!
Thanks for your comment.
xx

I will go give it a read...can you please provide your input for my latest posted clled Forever Chained

Thanks in advance

Done

could you please do:

A cheater's promise
and
How it died.

Thanks

--Steph

done left u my honest feedback but i must say that poem was really touching for a sad poem.

I'll r/r/c your poem!
Could you please do my latest poem called the Performance and maybe one of my featured poems?
Thanks a lot!
On my way to r/r/c your poem right now!

Laura,
Did "Forever Chained" and "Fallen Under The Spell".
I loved the vocab usage in both of them.
Thanks for the comment!
xx

Tainted Beauty*

Done. They were excellent.
Thanks for the comment.
xx

яoиa
Ill get to your tomorow after school, sorry i need to talk to a friend with something. Thansk for the comment and ill get to it as soon as i can.

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I did my best to comment on your poem. All I really want read is 'Welcome to Dreamhood." thanks.

i love ur poem! u can do any of my poems, i like when people comment my old ones, or the ones on my featured list... thanx!!

*Shawte*

Please read and comment on Die Young.

Thank you.

//T.L.//

Done.

Could you please do two of my latest seven?

Please and thank you.

xx

Thanks for the ocmments everyone! I really appreaciate them!

яoиa
I did The Performance, and Words Of Advice.
Both of which i really enjoyed reading!
Thanks for the comment, and sorry i comment yesterday which was what i was planning to do. xx

Taylor
I did the one you asked for and "On The Way to the Restaurant". Both great reads. Thanks for comments. xx

Shawte*
I did "Its Not Your Fault" and "You did this now". Both excellent reads. Thanks ofr your comment! xx

Truest Lies
Did the one oyu asked for and "Young Teen" Both very enjoyable reads. Keep it up! xx

Ray Lawson and ♥SoSickOfTears♥ ill get to both of yours tonight hopefully.
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Read and commented :]
Could you please comment on one of my latest poems, i'll let you choose which one.
thanx
x x

Ray Lawson, done.
Nice work.
thanks for comemnt.
xx

♥SoSickOfTears♥
Done,
i did, "Harmful Decisions" and "life".
Thanks for the comment!
xx

♥ leanne ♥
Thanks for the comment.
I did "Sitting in fear" and i also did "Walking free"
Keep it up! xx

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OK anyone else in? Ill do two of your and i dont leave one liners.

Done. =]

Just do any two of mine, thanks.

I did:
My Sisters Keeper,
A Hidden Soul.

Both excellent, especially enjoyed "my sisters keeper" since the book its based on, is one of my faves. Im going to re-read it now!
Thanks for the comemnt!
xx

ANyone else?

I would love some feedback please, on damaged, and any other one you would like, thanks, going to check out yours

checked it out, left a long comment actually, I think I will read some more. I wanted to let you know that I am very impressed with your writing. I have added you to my favourite list, you are my first one! Just thought that would be cool for you to know. Keep up the writing, very good vocabulary, very good description without being cliche, thanks for sharing. I am enjoying your work!

Hey. I would love any comments on my newest poems - I don't have any comments on most of them.

I'll do yours right now :)

cattiebrie
i did "Damaged and "Think Positive".
Really enjoyed them, great job! Thanks for adding me to your favourites, though i did write cliche, and im trying to stop now. If you look at my first few poems, they are cliche.
Thanks for your comment!
xx

...Me...
Did:
- Once My Life, Twice My Angel
- I Wont

Both great reads, really enjoyed them, thanks for the ocmment!
Take Care
xx

Anyone else?

Done, wow that was good!

Could you please do:
Blinded By Love
Internally Broken

Thanks heaps. =]

Tammie ♥

I'll comment straight away,
Please do "Buried Alive"
xxxxx

Tammie ♥
Done, Great writing, quite sad, yet the emotian in both was excellent!
Thanks for the comment!
xx

Tara-Kay
I did the one you asked for and "Nature's Kiss (Haiku)" Both great! really enjoyed them! Thankf for the comment! xx

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hey i loved it! can u comment 'you wanna stop' u can prolly relate and 'sometimes its so hard' thanks

~ANtoNiA~
Done, yes i could relate to "you wanna stop", im glad you have stopped, its an addiction. And no it is not worth it. Thanks for the comments, if oyu need to talk im hear!
Take care
xx

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