will do 5 poems...

  • Robie Lincer
    18 years ago

    hey everyone... i dont mean to bother you, but could you go to...

    www.freewebs.com/bleeding_page

    read 5 poems and vote for the best one, and i would i would r/r/c on 5 of ur poems

    please do rate for the best one... i need it so much!
    thanks...

  • BlueEyedMystery
    18 years ago

    I voted! They were all really good so it was a hard choice.

  • Robie Lincer
    18 years ago

    Thanks Cayce Lee
    i would do 5 of your poems right away...

    anyone else?!

  • awww
    18 years ago

    done... they were all wonderful poems... but i loved the poem 'Love Is'... what touched me the most was the last line... beautiful... do this poem and any other 4 that you choose... thx

    Mendacious Months
    *any other 4 poems

    ~angel~

  • Robie Lincer
    18 years ago

    thanks Awww...

    it means alot to me...
    i did :

    Mendacious Months
    Made in Tears
    Are Words Enough?

    i owe you 2 more... but my internet is being weird... when i open someones profile it shows me half a page... so i could only see you featured poems... could you write 2 more names here so i can read more of ur work... plz...

    thanks

    anyone else ... n please leave titles below...!!!!!

  • Tricky Daze
    18 years ago

    done honey..voted to your eyes(it's awesome)
    please do
    -my valentine,my love
    -erase my life as you erase my pain
    -killing me softly
    no need to 5,i don't want you to waste your more time
    ps.please don't forget to vote them,i will be thankful for you
    Thanks alot
    Laura

  • Robie Lincer
    18 years ago

    thanks .... it means alot to me...
    i would do ... and i wouldnt be waistin my time if i did 5 ;) ... :D

    my valentine,my love: done
    erase my life as you erase my pain
    killing me softly

  • Robie Lincer
    18 years ago

    anyone... elseee???

  • Robie Lincer
    18 years ago

    anyone elsee?

  • Edward D Zurovec
    18 years ago

    Great poems, I really liked the first one and cast it my vote. I would love to see a waterfall of roses and flowing over with Love. Great poem! Great work!
    Please read Edward Zurovec
    Untitled
    Little Bar Eyes
    WOE
    Woven Lovers
    Thank you so much and Happy Valentines Day

  • BECCA lessTHANthree
    18 years ago

    ill do it.. can you please do
    - away from you
    - teasing to please
    - grow old with you
    - valentines day letter
    - she lives only in winter
    THANKS SO MUCH! :D

  • BECCA lessTHANthree
    18 years ago

    oh wow... i just read them.. they were all really great.. my favorite was "meaning of love"

    anyways in the poem "your eyes"

    in this stanza
    "When i look in your eyes,
    I see he love you have for me,
    written on your tear drop."

    i think you meant to write
    "When i look in your eyes,
    I see THE (not "he") love you have for me,
    written on your tear drop."

    -becca

  • .K.i.T.t.Y.
    18 years ago

    ill have to get back to you on this one. i took a glimpse of the poems, they looked good. but i dont have time to read them all, so ill have to do it later. is that ok?

  • LadyWaszky
    18 years ago

    ill do it. =]

    Done. i really liked the last one. your eyes.
    the deep in your eyes was good too. but i liked the last one best.

    if you would please just read and comment upon the Beginning. (chapter one)
    its a short story, well the first chapter of one so its long.
    if you didnt mind, i wouldnt either if you did more, but thats up to you. =]

    link- http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/slang/poems.php?id=841496

  • Robie Lincer
    18 years ago

    Edward Zurovec thanks for the vote means alot to me!!!

    Edward Zurovec:done
    Little Bar Eyes: done
    WOE= will do later... cant read this from school
    Woven Lovers: done
    Untitled: done

    i love all 5 poems... they were really good...
    and thanks again...

    happy valentines to you too... hope you had a great day...

  • Robie Lincer
    18 years ago

    becca ♥ thanks so much for the votes... it means alot to me... it really does...

    away from you: done
    teasing to please: done
    grow old with you: done
    valentines day letter: could not find it...
    she lives only in winter: done

    your poems are really good... loved all 4 of themm... keep it up... you really got the talent...

  • Jacob
    18 years ago

    Done. Deep in your eyes got my vote. They were all good, but I liked that one the most.

  • Robie Lincer
    18 years ago

    ¤Kitty¤

    its okay you can take your time... but when you vote let me know so i can do 5 of your poems.,..

    thanks in advanced! :)

    robie

  • Robie Lincer
    18 years ago

    Sociopathetic [Lauren]

    the story was really good...

    Underneath:done
    the Beginning: done
    Backdrop: done
    Falling Star Quarterback: done
    A Prescription Changed : done

    thanks for the vote it means alot to me...
    i loved all your poems... they are all really good!

  • Robie Lincer
    18 years ago

    Lectori Salutem

    Thanks for the vote it means alot to me!

    1.Picture In A Frame (Acrostic): done
    2.Not sure yet : Done
    3.Rain (Haiku): done
    4.Drugs(Etheree): done
    5.Hold you: done

    loved all 5 of your poems... keep it up!

  • Robie Lincer
    18 years ago

    Edward Zurovec

    WOE: done

    sorry couldnt do it at school... but i'm home now... and i read it... it was really good! keep it up!

  • Robie Lincer
    18 years ago

    anyone elseee???

  • Robie Lincer
    18 years ago

    -anti-depression-

    Thanks for the vote it means alot to me...

    1.In Months to Come : done
    2.Seven : done
    3.Why? : done
    4.Sorrow: done
    5.A World Full of Love: done

    loved all your poems... they are really good... keep it up!

  • Robie Lincer
    18 years ago

    anyone elsee???

  • Robie Lincer
    18 years ago

    anyone else???

  • Jenni
    18 years ago

    i voted. it was really difficult they were all really good [:

    please do.

    Radio Talk
    Static Radio
    Mistletoe: Oklahoma's State Flower
    Coffee Kiss
    Summer Rain

    thanks [:

  • Robie Lincer
    18 years ago

    Jenni

    Thanks for the vote ... it really means alot to me!!!!

    Radio Talk: done
    Static Radio: done
    Mistletoe: Oklahoma's State Flower: done
    Coffee Kiss: done
    Summer Rain: done

    Your poems are all really good... loved them... keep it up! always...

  • Robie Lincer
    18 years ago

    Anyone else?!

  • .K.i.T.t.Y.
    18 years ago

    MEE.

    OMG that was a hard decision. I loved them all so much. You have amazing skill. I voted on the first one.

    *sigh*
    amazing writing.

  • Robie Lincer
    18 years ago

    ¤Kitty¤

    Thanks for the votes it means alot to me!

    As You Walk : done
    Mustn't Caress My Sweet Love: done
    Of the Dire: done
    One Choice: done
    Curiosity: done

    I loved all your poems... they are all soo really good! keep it up!

  • Robie Lincer
    18 years ago

    DEAL CLOSED!
    DEAL CLOSED!
    DEAL CLOSED!

    THANKS TO ALL THE PEOPLE WHO VOTED FOR ME... IT MEANS ALOT TO ME!

    DEAL CLOSED!
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    DEAL CLOSED!